I am enjoying this story very much. It has definately caught my attention. Quite a cliffhanger at the end of chapter 3. I want to know what happens next!!

Please don't keep the reader waiting long! Keep up the good work! :)

SOO COL! You made them into such bad* characters! But then, they were always kind of hard core, in a glitzy bubble-gum pop way... anyway, I LOVED THIS! I can't believe I found such great stuff in this category... I mean, it's just Jem! But you do it SO well. Makes me think it ought to have been a bunch of novels instead of a TV show.

Anyway, awesomeness. Totally outrageous! ;-)

You do Jem SO PERFECTLY! I love how you captured the way Stormer speaks, and made everyone so retro! Even your sentence structure backs up the atmosphere of being in a different time. GREAT JOB! This is SO wonderful! LOVE IT!

that was GOLD!



it came Very Good.


5 stars * cp ^_^

keep it. up

I can't wait for Chapter 4 please update soon!

Sarah

This is an excellent story and one I hope has a happy end.
Also, excellent characterisation of the Misfits. Thank you for having them not be evil and uncaring because 'Zazz and Roxy can be mean, but I do think they aren't heartless and would help in such an awful situation. I wonder where Jetta is?

hello there ! i read your two chapters ... good ! very good ! but a lot of wrong word ! i dont think jerrica could says "fucking" !! but i await the next chapter soon

have a nice work and merry christmas too !

jimmy

nice one!


it. would be cool to see. jerrica try to kill the Guy that's
Got kim when the Girls Get her back home.



chapter 3 please?


^_^

So far so good! You have me hooked!

Sarah

i love it. when i'm in a story

but anyways, you made me like kimber

i didn't think that could be.


me like story


ps. did you and aja have kids yet?



^_^


just play a long.

I'm not really a Jerrica and Rio pair fan but so far you have me interested. Good job!

Sarah