Great ending, I loved it! Regret sounded like running water. Genius

I really liked this story. The way it was told had me sucked in that i was surprised at the end and also disappointed that it was over. Really good work.

Good story, but sad.

I read this over a week ago with a bunch of other stories and these lines have stayed with me so much that I went searching back for this story just so I could comment and tell you. I absolutely love your descriptions here. It makes me really happy :)

Sam learned a lot about his brother that night, learned the answers to all the things he’d wondered about when he’d let himself think about them.

What did Dean taste like? Life. What did Dean feel like? Home. What did Dean sound like? Hope.

Awesome writing! Life, Home and Hope...Yes, Yes and YES!

That is exactly what the show means to me :)

Thanks for writing this.

That was really beautiful.

Thanks for sharing!

L xx

Ok. This was an incredible read, especially the way it ties into Wash Us Clean with the last line.

Although this was unbelievably hot, there was this constant reminder of who these boys were with Dean's almost harsh worry about his Sammy and Sam being all contemplative and nostalgic about the moment. Sweet.

"the scar from the wound that had killed him, had eventually killed Dean, too." Whoa, I never thought of it that way. Insightful, Gator.

"And this…this would just be something else Dean would blame himself for—Sam’s final fall into wickedness, courtesy of Dean Winchester. He’d wear it like a thorny crown, as a reminder of his weaknesses." Dude, that is so deep. I love it.

Ouch, and once again this ending hurts so good. I adore it to pieces.

xoxo

OMG! this story is amazingly incredbly wonderfuly BEAUTIFUL. Keep up with that writing great job.