Um. OC? While the story wasn't badly written, I feel you didn't do much planning in terms of how your character would fit into the canon plot. It almost feels like Mary Sue. Who is Rose? We don't know anything about her, and jumping straight into a story that demands we accept that she's been there all along is... well, not easy to do. Try more character development to improve.

Awww 3 But this really should go under the Rhapsody Trilogy section, not the Symphony of Ages section, cause that's where all the other fics are. Anyway, this story was great. XD

aww its sweet I love Achmed. Although I have no idea who Rose is... I should probably finish the series before I start reading fanfiction... anyway, well done. Although in the future, I suggest checking your grammar a few times, spacing etc, but nothing major. (I'm just OCD.)

I love this series so much, my heart lept into my head inhte span of half a second. Excellent one shot. You really did the story well. Any plans for another chapter?