More?
Pwease?
:>

(yesh, ponder is an epic win.)

Firefox ate my review. Twice. You better feel loved.
I don't usually review - I hit it & quit it so to speak ;D - but since you asked so nicely and you're fuelling my Seiner obsession~
I love your style, that mouthrape line made me giggle. I also like how you built it & ended it. You didn't just skip straight to the match, you had Seifer's thoughts before and after and I loved that xD
We didn't actually see much of Hayner though D: MORE HAYNER DX

Anyway. Loved it, defo fave.
-skips off to read your other fics-

I loved the characterization of Seifer in this. His personality really came across and I found it very realistic and convincing. He was easy to connect with and fun to listen to while he ranted, and of course the fic ended with his usual snark which I love. I think that the writing was very good and I couldn't find any mistakes, which is nice.

I think it would be cool if you made the opposite side of this, a fic on Hayner's POV while he thinks about it. It would be interesting to see their different feelings on the situation, but that's just an idea. I think that you write from Seifer's POV very well and I suggest doing it more in the future because it worked out very well. :)

Yupyup, ponder is a good word. It holds so many different images. Not that kind of images, dirty pples... Heheh maybe though... Ahem! Bwahahaha 'Tough guys always have teddy bears.' It's true! ^^Professor Fluffsikins. Seifer's secretly a little boy at heart. Heehee. Like. I read 'This is Why' and I think you've done really well with both of them and you've amanged to keep them pretty much IC. Even the Professor Fluffsikins bit. God, that name rules. ^^ 'Headache and a **'?... Yeah sounds like some kind of spy/action movie. Starring: Seifer and Hayner! BWAHAHAHAHA XD

Woah. This story is made of win on a stick!! I luff the way you wrote Seifer. :)

I agree. Ponder is an excellent word. I loved the way you portrayed Seifer in this! It was absolutely fantastic! Great job.

There must be more!...please?

Bowing silently to this universal law, Seifer sat down in the sunset shade of an alley, within sight of the Sandlot, and proceeded to ponder


Seriously. I was waiting for some kind of Buddha-esqe Siddharthian moment of divine knowledge to come to him there. XD

I'd... I'd like to see more of this plz.

Two words; Epic win.

:D HOLYCRAPTHISSTORYISLAWLSAWESOMEANDYESTHATDOESSOUNDLIKEANAWESOMEMOVIETITLEUGHLAWLSISHOULDUSETHATINAFANFICDONTWORRYCUSIDGIVEYOUCREDITLOLIMNOTAMEANPERSONSOMETIMESXD so yeah.. I love making lines of random ness. (yeah, my reviews all in there. have fun figuring it out :D)

ahahha, oh wow. A headache and a hard-on does sound like a wonderful name for an rpg. You know, with the way Japanese sometimes handle English I wouldn't be surprised if it existed!

My favourite line however, was "his pants-tent taking on epic proportions"
but basically I think this whole fic is made of win, and I'm glad that there's some Seifer POV around. and yay.

I was thrilled with this story, until I realized that it claimed to be 'complete'. No, you can't do this to us! *looks suspiciously rabid-eyed* PLEASE do a sequel. Or something.

Your SeiferHayner interaction is adorable.

I like! Are you going to write a sequel? I'd love to read it if you did! I like this story (and this pairing) a lot!

I really liked your story! I always have respect for people who can write a scene where one person does something and the other doesn't return it, creating the friction of embarrassment... I suck terribly at writing embarrassing situations, because I tend to feel bad and have to go back and change it, haha... But it's so delicious to read! I found you wrote Seifer wondrously in character and seeing Hayner from his point of view made it very easy to see why he had fallen for him. Him and his sexy little bod...

Anyway. Very nice story! Long live Seiner!

(I nearly died at the description of the 'mouthrape'... so funny.)

Yey for another SeiHay fic! XD Yu have no idea how happy I was when I saw this on the top of the list. Now if only I could read Hayner's 'ponderings' on all of this...

LOL
Poor Seify. :D