Whoo! I was telling one of my friends why I liked DeiHina and HidaTema now and was just looking up your username again, and low and behold, this had been updated!
I love this story. It's one of the reasons I actually got into this whole fanfiction thing (I read it back before I had an account).
I really hope you find time to finish it, but I know how stuff goes.
It's really great, though. ^^

I love this fic! I really hope you keep writing, because this is great! You've got a high quality fic here, and it will be REALLY cool when you weave everything together. I love how you used the bomb as the common theme, and how you keep the reader in the dark so well, only revealing snippets. It's FANTASTIC and it makes me very, very happy. :) Great job - keep writing!

Oh, ew, Oro-chan... Ew. I hate him. A lot.

I like Temari in this chapter a lot, she's a bit more alert and serious (and pissed) compared to last Temari chatper, when she was just TIRED.

This is my favorite line, 'Now, she was bored, cold, in pain, angry, and being kept waiting.

Someone would die for this.' Hahaha, that is SO Temari. :)
But I love this line too, '"Dude... ” Hidan said, eyebrows raised, as he backed away from Orochimaru. “Being that creepy is definitely a sin.”' I agree, I totally agree. *shudders*


Take care!

Hinata! :) And Shino and Kiba of course.

...You've got to be kidding. They set a police building on fire. That's hilarious.

Okay, so Deidara is absolutely made of win. I love him.
The interactions you had between Deidara and Hinata are awesome, I think it's adorable and funny how you had him guessing all those things.

I wanna know where she got that scar... Because it sounds like a sad but interesting story.

This is my favorite line in this chapter, 'Hinata glanced up, semi-amused, but more startled, to see him grinning down at her, eyes so clearly honest that for a minute, she wondered what it would be like to hide nothing from anyone.' It kind of reminds me of me. :)

This line however was a close second, 'Because of her…I could almost care less about the upcoming fireworks.' ... AW! <3 SO fricking cute. ;)

take care. :)

I love this story, like seriously. Okay, so you're probably going to get this review after the chapter five one because I decided to go back and review all the chapter, because there's comments I wanted to make on all of them. So yeah. I've read all of the chapters that are up and I have decided that I love this. Yay.

Okay, so I love Hidan. He's just so funny. And he curses a hell of a lot. Which makes everything funnier.

... Temari's driving scares me. Really really badly.

Okay, so at first I was like, what the hell is a fan going to do, they're in modern times?! And then I read the other chapters and everything made SO much more sense.

Hahahaha, Kisame is the coast guard, that's amazing.

Oh, creepy screaming and gunshots, cool!
Hehehehe, Hidan thinks modeling is evil. That's just pure gold. :)

Okay, so this line stood out to me because it was worded amazingly and I just love it, 'And that wasn’t the wind, she mentally added. She, Temari Sabaku, knew what was and was not wind better than this odd policeman ever would.' <3

Tobi is so hilariously annoying. Seriously. :)

YAYZ for updations! But why is it so short? T.T I hope you continue and the chappies get longer!

Yay! I'm happy to see an update for this story!I don't know why but I cracked up a little at Hinata's realization that Deidara had mouths on his hands. Then again it was kind of cute that she realized that her byakugan wasn't exactly normal either.

D: poor hina.
lmao, deidara is just a big ball of handsome win.
lovely chapter. :)

Poor Hinata! I share her skittishness! Hope to read more soon! SC

I find this story very interesenting ...it really intrigues me. The plot is original and I like the pairigs that you arranged. Also I liked how you described the characters reactions and attitudes, so don't lose your interest in your story kas I'm looking forward for the next update

I really like this story, and I really want you to update! The pairings (ahemtemarihidanahem) are turning out to be quite interesting! ^_^ ~Nirii

Love it! Is it going to continue?

Letting Hidan's personality develop a little more. Very nice.

Haha, I really really really like this story! And this chapter.
Kind of interesting too...
I appreciated this update very much.

Haha, sorry that I haven't had time to read this 'till now. I didn't go on the computer at ALL during Winter Break and I've been busy with some things. But anyways, as always I was not disappointed with your work. I positively loved it! Especially the odd circumstances which resulted in Hinata being trapped in a bathroom with 'Officer' Deidara XD And then this chapter (3) brought even more mystery into the situation, while at the same time clearing some confusion, which is kinda rare. I haven't read much of that happening, anyway.

Oh, and a question about the title? Corolla? What's it mean?