 iceboxme 2008-12-04 . chapter 1I loved it! That's the best Sam and Max fic I've read so far! (Of couse, I've only red a couple, but that's not the point)
The writing was excellent, unique, and well in-character.
I never realized how important the soda poppers were to the storyline! I thought they were just a few characters put in the game to be both amusing and annoying at the same time.
Well, anyway, I hope you decide to write more. Maybe not add to this fanfic, but possibly write to another! |
 Breakman 2008-11-29 . chapter 1 Oops! Sorry for the double post. I wonder why "fan fiction . net" was missing from my sentence "I avoid like the plague." in my review (maybe the system/mods delete web addresses in posts?). Weird! And sorry! ^^; |
 Breakman 2008-11-29 . chapter 1 Hiya! It's Breakman from the forums and Wiki!
I avoid like the plague. I was sick of reading poorly written stories with out-of-character situations. Seeing that there was a site with nothing but fan fiction, it was only natural that I would squirm and "feel all crawly".
BUT! Since I know you are an excellent writer at the Wiki and didn't seem like a slash or boy-boy fan, I went against my judgment and went ahead and clicked the link to read your newest story.
All I can say is "wow". "Wow" in a good way, of course. I never read fan fiction so... cannon-like. Sam acted like Sam, Max acted like Max, and did a great job with Whizzer's character.
There were just one or two sentences that confused me (but after rereading them and reading a little ahead, they made sense).
You have done an awesome job. It must have taken a while to write and that effort shows. I really enjoyed the read. I may still avoid fan fiction, but if I see you making another Sam & Max one, I'll make an exception. B)
...uh... That's all I have. I think I will take my leave now. ^^; |
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