 Lady Spezz 2008-11-29 . chapter 1Absolutely great.
It's a little disappointing actually, that it's
only a one-shot, as it feels like it could be elaborated
more.
But your writing was near flawless, and I just loved the whole style of it. Especially the scene in the store. It was just so vivid. And all the little details that Meryl was trying to forget and yeah -- I loved it! Well done. |