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| Melii-chan^^ 2007-12-15 ch 18, anon. | abuseIt's been a long time since your last update. I really sad about it because this is a great story. I've read it a couple of times and I'm still waiting for you to keep writting. I know you are still alive xD! I hope you hear my suggest!! this is a great thing you have. |
| Ovrboost 2007-02-12 ch 18, | abuseBoy this sure is a great story... It really is a shame it will never be finished... Hint, hint, nudge, nudge... Oh well, atleast you dropped it on a high note. ~Rob |
| Andrew Connell 2006-07-19 ch 1, anon. | abuseI've been reading your story for quite some time now and it always shocks me how long the updates are. I know ive never sent in a Review, but before now all Ive ever used to get on the net was my old SEGA DC. Well now back to the point I've realy been enjoying it so far and I know you've probaly heard this all before but why was Kyione introduced into the OAV cast and please please please (I would do an infinity symble if i could) update soon I would really like to finish reading it before I die |
| Katsuhito 2006-06-18 ch 18, | abuseI just read the HTW series and I thought it was well done. While the mechanics are a little sloppy, the creative and developmental aspects are very good. I look forward to reading more of this story as it is written. (I'm also going to check and see what else you've written.) -Katsuhito a fellow Nekoshipper. :) |
| Turel 2006-01-22 ch 18, anon. | abuseI really love this fic, and I really enjoy to read it. I'm looking forward for the next chapter,... and when you don't write it I will haunt you down ;) *so please, I'm waiting^^* |
| bizoitnott 2005-10-21 ch 18, | abuseI just noticed you updated! Sorry I didn't review sooner. Somehow you weren't on my author alert list. That's fixed now. So anyways, yep, I loved this chapter, and look forward to the next. |
| MasterWraithe 2005-07-25 ch 18, | abusegod chapter, I especially liked the last bit with Ryo-oki. |
| ThebigW 2005-07-22 ch 18, | abuseIn spite of the random sp and gr nits (which I'm sure you'll fix in the final version), from the perspective of creativity, this is outstanding. As powerful an entity as Ryoko is, she's still brought to her knees at the prospect of life without him. As you've explained, his impact on her, on all of them, is so great that even her memories of before becoming Kagato's killing machine have likely faded into relative obscurity, so she can't connect to anything for emotional bearings unless he's in the center. You had her come very close to the "If I can't live without Tenchi, I won't live at all." level of depression, and that was quite scary. Now what? He has to face Ayeka. Now what? Sasami will reveal? Now what? You're not letting Mihoshi off that easily, are you? Now what? Kiyone/Laurynas... some of us Kiyone fans would like to see more heat now, please. Now what? Washu is not a machine, and unless Dr. Washu is self-diagnosing and prescribing, she will break, soon. Now what? Yosho gave Ayeka the exact right answer, and I love the parable of the three hearts you included. Ayeka gave the exact answer as befits her character. The dialog that's coming when she faces him for the first time is highly anticipated. Now what? Umm, Misaki may have to break some bones (perhaps she'll have a chance to spar against some of the soldiers?), you know, to get back to normal? Regards. W. |
| ni9htdreame12 2005-07-17 ch 18, anon. | abuseyay another chapter!! yay they found tenchi! ahaha ayeka!! see ryoko was right he is alive. sighs wake up soon tenchi. |
| JL-neverdied 2005-07-17 ch 18, | abuseAbsolutely wonderful story! But check your spelling/grammar a bit more. But it's still very good! I applaud your ingenuity! |
| Lost 2005-07-16 ch 18, anon. | abuseIt's been a fair wait, and it was a little difficult to remember who some of the new characters were at first. But as ever i quickly got into it and had a good read. This chapter, more than anything else seems to be a promise of things to come, and i look forward to see where the tenchi cast move forward from here. In case its not clear, yes i really liked this story, but like any of the more well developed fan fic that i read, the wait between chapters is both a curse and a blessing, as patience is not my strong point, but there's nothing like a good wait to make you eager to read a good story. |
| ni9htdreame12 2005-05-02 ch 17, anon. | abusePLEASE UPDATE! totally in love with this fic.. please update soon. |
| MasterWraithe 2005-04-09 ch 17, | abuseWhoo hoo, an update. And a good one at that. Can't wait for the next one. |
| ThebigW 2005-04-07 ch 17, | abuseWell of course you ended the chap on that note! Nice dramatic buildup, though, keeping us guessing. I've been waiting a long time (over a year, now) for the guilty to be brought to justice, so hurry up and dispense, already. If I have to shovel snow again before I find out what Tsunami told Sasami... Better yet, tell your Kim Possible fans that they have to wait while you conduct more important business, namely, finishing this fic before your readers are all eligible for AARP! Also, it would be nice as you wrap this up to have Ryoko eventually explain to Ayeka just how close she came to actually killing her; Ayeka put her faith in their tenuous friendship over her responsibility to her subjects to keep herself out of harm's way in all situations. Lastly, the stress on all of them is great, but it's got to be killing Washu. She needs some emotional release soon, however you choose to provide it. Thanks again for this fic. W. |
| wendyghost 2005-03-24 ch 17, | abuselove your fic, please hurry and update, i really like the way its set don't worry about anything is great the way it is. |