*sighs* there aren't words to say how much I like that she knows him better than he himself. And I absolutely love that she can sense his feelings when he's the one that feels and manipulates emotions. Gah, I love that control that she has over him.

that is so sweet...i never thought about jasper as a romantic tye!its nice to see their story

This was very well written. Bravo!

I read all the reviews for this chapter, and I promise I won't use 'cute' or 'adorable' once.

I thought it was extremely passionate, and very in character. Not a lot of people stick to Jasper's impossible love and adoration for Alice, and often overlook the fact the his everything is her. I liked how you made it that way in your story.

You kept Alice the way she's supposed to be, too, and that was refreshing.

Good Job.

I really liked the vampire references in here. To drink from her, and so on. Because Jasper wasn't hungry for blood, he was hungry for her...

Good idea, that is.

I also really love how you made Jasper all about loving and pleasing Alice. It didn't really seem like he wanted to do that for himself at all, but rather to see her face and her body.

Amazingly written, at that. Adorable, loving and so completely J/A (hard to find sometimes). For that, I congratulate you.

that was very sweet and cute.

that's so sweet

Aw, this was very cute. :)

Awesome job. Love it.

that was adorable! totally captured the alice/jasper relationship or what i think it is anyways. awsome job.