AWESOME!

it was great okay stop putting your self down

Update soon!

Nice Chapter!

AWESOME STORY!
KEEP GOING!
AWESOME!!

please please please update! this is getting intresting!

DUDE! I THINK THAT U SHOULD TOTALY CONTINUE THE STORY! IT GOT SO CUTE AT THE END. JUST PLZ DONT MAKE TOUSHIRO LEAVE AND THEN FALL IN LOVE WITH MOMO ADN LEAVE KARIN IN THE DUST...THATS JUST PLAN OUT MEAN! (JK) BUT ANYWAYS...I THINK THAT THIS IS AN AWSOME STORY AND THAT U SHOULD WITHOUT A DOUBT, CONTINUE!

AW! HOW CUTE! WELL I PERSONALY THINK THAT YOU SHOULD CONTINUE THE STORY. I ONLY C 2 CH AND I WAS HOPING THAT U WERE STILL GONNA CONTINUE IT. BUT ITS REALLY GOOD SO FAR. HOPE U DESIDE TO CONTINUE THIS STORY. CANT WAIT TO "HEAR" (STORY WISE) FROM YA SOON! ^.^

i love the pairing big Toshiro and Karin fan keep up the good work

omg!! You absolutely have to continue!! I really love this^^

hi!! I love your fic! it's fantastic, very interesting!!
umm I hope you put the next chap! I want to read more! xD
hahaha well... I hope you can put the next chap soon, yeah??
kisses, bye...

Toushiro is just a tiny bit OOC. But it's not that bad, so don't freak. Other than that, it was an excellent story!

continue please author-san.I like it.

CONTINUE, CONTINUE, CONTINUE, CONTINUE! GREAT CHAPTER!

great start/chapter.