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Lilithakaducky
2009-03-19 . chapter 13
Hi.

I just stumbled across this fic and you have me in awe. You're a wonderful, exceptionally gifted writer. I adored it. The depth, the emotion was so real. Poor Sammy. That's exactly how I imagined it to have been for him. I hope we'll get to see a bit more of his four months, which would also explain better his turn to do what he thinks he must, no matter the consequences, even risking addiction. The saying about the road to hell being paved with good intentions never rang so true as for Sam.

(Sorry for my spelling. My maternal language isn't English)
ArmagonAuthor
2008-12-09 . chapter 13
What? You're done?!

:(

Poor, poor Sam...
Poor Bobby...

I would love to read a sequel to this, if you are interested!
shaken-silence
2008-12-07 . chapter 13
Well it is 4:30 in the morning and I read your entire story in one clip. If that isn't an endorsement for you I don't know what is. Not to mention it was a story with very little Dean which would normally put me off but I must say that I enjoyed it very much.
Zatnikatel
2008-12-06 . chapter 13
I still love this despite the Deanlessness… love how you are filling in the gaps for what we see in ep 9…
lelann37
2008-12-06 . chapter 13
love the story, thanks for sharing
UThnkUrFunny IThnkImAdorable
2008-12-05 . chapter 10
Aw... this was so SAD! Poor Sammy is getting more desperate by the minute. This is an AWESOME story! Can't wait for the next update!
OcherMe
2008-12-04 . chapter 9
In regards to your review reply...I completely understand. The story is already written, and I'm sure it's amazing as it is:) But if you ever do decide to write the Dean's return from hell, I will be more than eager to read it:)

I enjoyed this chapter. Good job again:) I can only imagine how much of a shock it is for Sam to have lost his brother. Its understandable that it would have taken him awhile to start to be himself again and come back to reality a bit. I hope we have a talk between Bobby and Sam soon. Also, I really liked your comparison between Dean and Sam in their grief. It was very interesting to see the contrast between the brothers.

I look forward to your next update!
V.R. Jennings
2008-12-04 . chapter 9
This is a really good story! It's so beautifully written, and your version is definitely my favorite! Keep up the fantastic job!! :D
ArmagonAuthor
2008-12-03 . chapter 8
This story is so good!

I wanted to write a story like this, but you beat me to it, and honestly I really like your version!

Bravo!
ArmagonAuthor
2008-12-03 . chapter 4
AW!

:(:(:(

This was amazing! I love how you added the part about the keys and the Impala, because it just shows how hard things are for Sam!
ArmagonAuthor
2008-12-03 . chapter 3
I really like this. It's so sad! Poor Sammy!
OcherMe
2008-12-03 . chapter 8
Sad:( Poor Sammy. I very much enjoyed this chapter (if enjoy is the appropriate word for something this heartbreaking). You have once again done a magnificent job at capturing Sam's sorrow.

In response to your response to my last review, I understand not writing all 4 months since we don't know everything that Sam went through. But perhaps once you've finished with the immediate aftermath of his death, you could skip forward to when Dean comes back. I would love to read your take of Sam, and Dean's, reactions of his return from hell. Perhaps draw your story into a full circle...from the end of season 3 to the beginning of season 4. Plus...I'm definitely a Dean girl and am dying to hear from his side a little bit:) Not that I don't love Sammy...

Anyways...great chapter:) Looking forward to your next update:)
Zatnikatel
2008-12-03 . chapter 8
I'll say it again: a really stunning portrayal of the temporary insanity that accompanies grief. Well done...
OcherMe
2008-12-02 . chapter 7
Oh man. So sad. Poor Sam. Poor Bobby. Hell, poor Dean. I could only imagine what Sam had gone through in this time between season 3 finale and season 4 premier. You've done a wonderful job at capturing it:) Keep it up. I look forward to your next chapter!

By the way, I hope you do Sam and Bobby's thoughts upon seeing Dean alive again. I think you capture their characters beautifully and would love to read that.

Update soon!
UThnkUrFunny IThnkImAdorable
2008-12-02 . chapter 7
O! I really like this story! Please update soon!
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