|Reviews for Aquamarine: Untitled Because I Suck At Titles|
| DancingintheRayne 2/4/13 . chapter 9
:0 such a great chapter!
| sparrhawk 2/2/13 . chapter 9
I am really enjoying this story. I love your writing style and the character interactions.
Ryan's an interesting character, though I'd like to know what happened to him that made him so distrustful and cynical... He couldn't have always been like that, could he?
Haha, and I must say Hailey is smarter than people give her credit for...
I can't wait for the next update, I'd also like to know what happened between humans and mermaids...
| greenrose15 4/14/12 . chapter 7
WOW this is reallyyyy good!
the plot line is interesting, your writing is amazing and characterization is perfection :)
i hope you update soon and continue with this GREAT story :D
really good job!
| Em 1/23/12 . chapter 7
Please update! Im in love with this story!
| Ashez2604 9/27/11 . chapter 6
Love it update plzzzzz
| DancingintheRayne 9/25/11 . chapter 6
Aww! Update soon!
| someone 9/18/11 . chapter 5
UPDATE! PLEASE :)
| xxxRainingxxIcexxx 9/5/11 . chapter 5
Please, please, please update soon! I'm dying to know what happens. Great story, by the way. :)
| Chocomel68 7/28/11 . chapter 5
im only gonna say one word 'MORE!'
| Natalie 5/6/11 . chapter 5
Aaaaah! more, more, more! I love the way this story is going! I love Aquamarine, and you really seem to as well! Please, upload more! I need to know what's going to happen! haha! You're an amazing writer, keep it up!
| KittyLyn96 4/28/11 . chapter 5
I am loving this story. I can not wait until the next chapter comes out. You really nailed the characters. Congrats and Great job! 3
| Becca118 1/17/11 . chapter 4
I really liked the storyline and everything and I'd love to hear more- I want to know how he knows about Aqua! The only criticism I have is that when you write speech, you're supposed to start a new paragraph every time a different person starts talking. For example:
"There's something extremely important you have to know."
"How did you dry off so fast?"
"That is not extremely important," replied Aqua...
etc. It's not a huge thing, but doing it makes it clearer and easier for stories to read :)
| Keike13 10/10/10 . chapter 4
I love it, Love It, LOVE IT!
| lilmissmindy 9/16/10 . chapter 4
| DancingintheRayne 4/22/10 . chapter 4
Really good story! Love it! Hope u update soon!