This was so sad, so pretty. Beautiful.

i love this, it's really really good

dobby

Love it! Carlisle is such a complex character, one of the few who suffers as much emotionally as Edward does (maybe even more) and he didn't really get his say in the books. I know it had to hurt him to watch someone he had offered to take in die. That was such a horrible moment.

Oh! I really liked this. I love reading things from Edward's POV. I loved Eclipse and I'm almost finished with Breaking Dawn, which has been really good too. Great job on this, you nailed Edward's personality to a tee!

That was simply wonderful.
Keep writing!

that was so well written. i loved it!