Really beautifully written !
I liked it ^^

Solace was beautifully written, done especially more so by your unique style and simplistic wording. It flows like a grim, yet light melody that tells of more beyond the written; you leave such room for more that it almost drives me insane [pun...slightly intended], and yet any more would destroy the curiosity that we find in this - perfectly so, that even Kid himself would love.

You blend the characters personalities so well, and yet you can tell the development put behind it, in Kid's forwardness, and the learned hardness in Maka's.

Their relationship together is so utterly fragile and tender, yet held in such balance, which makes me riveted in fascination. Kid and Maka are in a relationship I suspect neither of them actually understand, beyond the hardened resolutions that they are not in love with eachother; it is more so that they have developed deeper feelings that extend into their souls.

Beautiful, macabrely whimsical, this story is a true artist's work. You deserve a welldeserved round of applause.

OMJ OMJ OMJ THIS WAS AWESOME SO SWEET bt sad cuz u say soul dies BUT ITS SO AWESOME I LOVE MAKA*X*KIDD and MAKA*X*SOUL but i LOVE MAKA*X*KIDD XD write more =P

its sorta sad but i'm glad that you wrote this fic thx

aww
at the moment - MY ASS!
In my mind, they get engaged and married!
WOOT!
And have a son called SOUL (Yeah, that's right!)

I am torn between SoulMaka and KidMaka to be honest... but this was just amazing. I love the words. Everthing is so well-phrased and just filled with emotion.

Lovely.

aww this is sweet and sad

i personally am not kidxmaka but its still a good story. well written

Wa!!
Excellent! I'd like to read more about KidxMaka, They are Lovely Dovely! >u<

Your writting skills are wonderfull, I hope I can read more some day.

Se ya!

I loved it there aren't many Kid/Maka stories on here... some of the ones i read were dumb but this was a breath of fresh air from my usual Maka/Soul... hope you do more in the future

L8r
MiSS J

And that left me wanting more, so congratulations you wrote a really good fic!
You captured the characters feelings and didn't overdo it (which is really good), is short but it can tell a lot about how they became (as grown ups), hope to read more from you!

Adieu~!

wow
I...
wow,
THis makes me wanna cry so bad ಥ_ಥ

I loved it, it was a great story and I was about to cry when it said that Death The Kid didn't love her and vice versa.

Ah, I love it~!

Aww this is great. I liked it.