can't wait to read more

Such a sweet story‼ Hm? Could there be a sequel? Maybe a twelve year old Dawn frightening the hell out of the Goa'uld, Asgard, PTB, and her parents?
Just don't make her a klepto a la Azusa Shiratori, naming her acquisitions Pierre or Bertrand.
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i cant believe they cant tell anyone! lol
i wonder how willow and others of buffys gang will react to janet and the others

Awesome chapter, I can't wait until you update next. Please, please, please, please, please update soon. Please?

Dani

ya what?

ah out of the mouths of babes, cant wait for the next

Awesome chapter, I can't wait until you update next. Please, please, please, please, please update soon. Please?

Dani

Yes‼ Dawn seems ready. Now if her parents will just cooperate‼!
Now, if only Dawn would start asking for a little brother or sister.
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DARN! What's WRONG with you! WHy'd you stop there!?!

omg...thats gotta hurt buffy's hungover head...

There, there. The end part is the worst thing to write. I approach it like ripping off a band-aid (or getting in the pool, or looking at a test grade or bills): just pick something that resolves some relatively large issue... perhaps in this case... er... well, that's your problem I guess. Whahahah! You could try for Dawnie revealing that she knows that Jack is her dad, maybe... Anyway- pick that thing, write the end like BANG and then stop.

On the other hand... why stop? You could introduce instead a more fun plot element. Like (ok, give it a chance) Monsters vs. Aliens! It would be too amusing. Well, maybe not, as it would also be tricky. Unless you had those Go'auld sleeper peeps doing demon summoning or something... eh, I dunno. You're the author. If you're sick of it, best to at least sort-of-finish it rather than keep going and getting grumpy and resentful.

I hear you on NaNoWriMo- trying to get enough fanfic back-written so I can write something original for that. It'll be my first time doing the 50k/mo thing in the right month... damnable writing itch hitting in February or October... *grumble*

can't wait to read more! hope you post soon

YEA! I liked the talk between Jack and Buffy... long time coming... Charlie... tears... I don't mind if you can't finish the story... means i get to read it that much longer... I enjoyed this chapter tho... can't wait for the next... UP DATE SOON-ISH!

Can only hope a shared load is a lighter one for Buffy and Jack. May your muse bring you pretty flowers and much chocolate.
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Awesome chapter, I can't wait until you update next. Please, please, please, please, please update soon. Please?

Dani