I want to read more :) LOVE the things I've read that you've written, so continue writing... Congratulations btw on making NaNoWriMo :)

Woohoo! Congrats on finishing this story and making NaNoWriMo! This was very cute, decent ending. But I definitely want a Go'auld ** kicking sequel!

Sad to see it end, was a great story =) Look forward to any sequels ...til then.

Im sad to see this story end... But it was a great read... I loved it... If you do write a sequel I will gladly read it...
~Nova

I LOVE THIS SORRY! So sad it's done:( But can't wait for more:) THANK YOU! u made avoiding homework that much more entertaining:D <3

What a fun story! Thanks so much for writing!

i shall eagerly await more!

Okay, I really like the way this story is slowly going! NotJana is a very darn good author!

I miss them already. Good luck on your next project.

AW MAN...
i dont want it to be over

awe it over so sad
but good fic

Awesome last chapter. I loved this story. Keep up the great work.

Dani

A good ending to a very good story.

And congrats on your NaNo word count! I got mine, too. :-)

can't wait to read more

Such a sweet story‼ Hm? Could there be a sequel? Maybe a twelve year old Dawn frightening the hell out of the Goa'uld, Asgard, PTB, and her parents?
Just don't make her a klepto a la Azusa Shiratori, naming her acquisitions Pierre or Bertrand.
^_^