  Readasaur 3/26/02 . chapter 1 No-brainer if you saw the episode, but the chopped words in a row wasn't a bad story body. |
| Kristita 1/7/02 . chapter 1 It's Hutaru, isn't it |
| LadyGalaxy 9/26/00 . chapter 1 Saturn of course! This was really good cause it was the last episode of the S series in a nut shell! Keep up the good work. |
| lil'firefly Furusutsu 9/8/00 . chapter 1 Hey, I like! Very abstract, but I like that... |
| Anony Miss 7/30/00 . chapter 1 Confusing but good. This is about Hotaru rite? : |
| Kawaii Beka-Chan 7/24/00 . chapter 1 Wow, Deep, good work |
| anon 7/21/00 . chapter 1 Saturn... |
 Nuri 7/21/00 . chapter 1nice hotaru poem... |
| Lily Andrews 7/21/00 . chapter 1 Saturn! I love her...She's the best. I know someone who looks exactly like her |
| Kat 7/21/00 . chapter 1 Saturn, right? Great job! |
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