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OMG, Beautiful!

wow! loved it :D

i usually recognise a love scene like this one as well-written if i can really feel what the characters are feeling. how can i know that for sure? well, is this fic it was really, really easy :D your writing was so good that i could have the best feeling of all when reading - butterflies! i could feel the pain and desperation but i could feel the relief and the love they share. i already missed the feeling of having butterflies in my stomach - and your story make them come back :P

i really thing you should keep going. you know that cassandra clare also started writing fanfics, right? ;)

Omg that was amazing! Reading about Jace acctualy letting go of his tough exterrior like that ... I loved it.

Great diplays of emotion, you really caught the same ones from the book well.

Mesmerized me. I love it.

This was really fantastic! I absolutely love your style of writing, and you do so well writing the pairing.

O! STEAMY. Wonderful writing. Good job on the characters.

Great story!

I absolutely lov your stories but I have to say that this onewasn't as good as your other Clary/Jace Oneshots.

this was amazing. it felt really detailed, but not to the point where there's too much. its just right. it explains everything and there's a feeling behind it

meg

I cannot get enough of your writing...I absolutely LOVE it!

Yet again, another fantastic success...you cannot stop here though, I'm waiting with baited breath for more :)!

Loved it! I enjoy the amount of detail you put in to all of your stories. I'll definitely be adding you to my author notifications list.

I absolutely love your stories about the mortal Instruments series. Especially theses lovely one shots. Your way with words lets off an undeniable demand for respect. I LOVE it. When you write more you can count on my review!

I LOVE your Jace/Clary stories, and you seriously need to write more. Like, a lot more, just to make me happy. Seriously.

Yet again you prove your prowess as a writer. Keep going!

willowgrace

Fabulous. Totally love this. :) Well written!