Now this was written very well. I wouldn't mind a sequel to be honest...

Nothing like a good J/P fic for the soul... :) I really enjoyed reading this, it's well-written and believable and leaves room for a future relationship without it being angsty. It's too bad their relationship never developed further on the show. There was definitely something there and it would have been so much more exciting than a J/C pairing.

Nicely done. Just the right balance between levity and seriousness. I love the interplay with all the characters -- everyone is written so well, but especially Tom. Thanks for sharing.

I really love the slow way you first destroy, and then rebuild this relationship, and show the collateral effects on the others around--Seven's snippy jealousy, B'Elanna's emotional rollercoaster, Chakotay standing back and watching, and so on. Thank you.

I always get so excited when I see you have a new fic posted. Im running out of ways to say how much I love your writing...yete again this was fab...Im so glad someone out there is still writing J/P! XO