I just read this over and I'm having a bad day, and it just made me cry, cry, cry.

Man, I almost cried. That was REALLY great. Thanks for writing it.

EP

Powerful. I really enjoy your writing style.

that was really good

wow. it was so odd, but her little note to edward at the end made me spontaneously burst into tears. i loved it, in other words. the whole story was great. good job. :)