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Paradoxismminant
2009-07-31 . chapter 1
Heh heh..delicious.

lolz.
kelly
2009-07-12 . chapter 1
this was a really good story..very well written!
TheFallenbecomesHaunted
2009-07-11 . chapter 1
Wow sexy! lol
iluvkenny
2009-05-04 . chapter 1
I absolutely love the idea of Naruto and Sasuke as chefs! It's adorable xD
Great job with this, I loved it! <3
Yaoil masta forever
2009-04-19 . chapter 1
ah this is why i love yaoi because oof storys like this
Kamerreon
2009-04-14 . chapter 1
LMAO. Only Naruto would plot for five years to get together with someone he doesn't even really know. It was adorable, and hot, and had me in stitches. Great job.

-Kay
Azamiko
2009-03-11 . chapter 1
^_^ You seem to really like cooking or cooking shows. You included recipes!
kunf'you'z-ed
2009-02-17 . chapter 1
hell yes! i loved this story! it was really good! thanx, bye!
Rekuushi Roe
2009-02-14 . chapter 1
oh my...! *nosebleed* nicely writen! but a little tip, the speed of the lemon part was a little bit fast...otherwise, it was excellent! i'll read more of your stories now...
littlelightbulb
2009-02-12 . chapter 1
ahaha...this was so good...hilarious and hot. love the parallel between the naruto sasuke -ness in konoha and in the baking world, if that makes sense...jiraiya and all the minor chracters on the show were also perfect. love love love!
PonderingSoul
2009-01-12 . chapter 1
good story! a hint though that "come", like sperm, is spelled cum. once again good story!
sailormulti01
2009-01-09 . chapter 1
Excuse me...

FUCK IT ALL, THAT WAS FUCKING HOT!

Eheh... OwO

I'm usually not like that I swear... But truthfully, this is just so effin' amazingly nose-bleeding... Ep! And it's really sweet that Naruto knew him all along! Lol. The last line made me wonder what Sasuke'd do next though! Hahahhaha!
B.D. Gerretson
2009-01-09 . chapter 1
Absolutely wonderful!! I loved this completely! Sexiness perfection!
KittyBlue
2009-01-09 . chapter 1
now that was yummy. *nosebleeds* :3
j7nX
2009-01-09 . chapter 1
M, this story was deliciously sinful and very funny. I really enjoyed reading it and I'd love it if you made a sequel, 'cause 'Revenge would be so sweet.', ne?
Take care and keep up the awesome work :)
j7nX
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