Ironic that Tony was the only one capable of clear thinking. Of course, without family he had no hooks for Michelle to try to manipulate him the way she did with everybody else on the team; but I'm thinking he mainly reacted like a cop. Really great story, not a word wasted.

Good story, I can't remember Cloak and dagger but it seems good. I remember Agent Lee being killed though so I must've slept through most of the show :D. Good story and I think someone needs to look more into Tony's background.

This is good. Dunno why you haven't updated, but I'm sure it's a reason. I'm really interested in what Tony's gotten up to.

Interesting. I can't wait to read what you put next! I'm hoping for some interaction between Gibbs and Tony though. I loved your characterization! Thanks for writing and I hope to read more (of all your stories) soon!

great start! Update soon!

Great story, good ideas.

That's an interesting angle-Tony not sympathizing because he had no family. Great job keeping them in character. Thanks!

No no no. Don't go leaving it like that. I hope this isn't a one shot. So many waysyoh could go.As usual, great job portraying Tony's inner workings.

I liked it. Nothing excuses her actions, and it was a really good look at the characters. Very good imagery. Thanks.

great story! hope to see more from you soon!

Loved it! You know I love all your stories because they're about Tony! Thank you, thank you, thank you! Makes for some good reading without a lot of fluff.

Wonderful! I agree with your assessment of Tony not believing Lee. I agreed with him. She should have gone to Gibbs. I love these types of stories. Not the romance stuff. The actual relationships between the characters. You do it well. Please continue.

I loved this. Great portrayal x

This is definitely interesting. I didn't get all the Lee sympathy- she murdered two innocent people in cold blood. It's still murder, so I'm definitely with Tony on this one.

I really liked this. You explained Tony's feeling perfectly -- at least how I interpret the feelings. I thought everyone glossed over her killing Langer too easily. Maybe not Gibbs. He was truly innocent - just a guy in the wrong place at the wrong time. That's wrong.

Like Tony said - you can understand her killing the kidnapper or someone involved in the whole thing -- but a totally innocent person...

Love when I get a story that shows Tony as he is -- a complex smart person.

Thanks so much!