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Asucaga4ever!
2009-10-27 . chapter 5
when r u going to finish tis? don't leave everyone in suspense!
midnight blue08
2009-07-27 . chapter 5
waah is cagalli being attacked?
save her athrun...
taylaacheer7
2009-07-14 . chapter 5
aww the ending!! :( i need more!! lol
Xx Meisha xX
2009-07-06 . chapter 5
Oh no, who took Cagalli?!
And is Athrun hallucinating...? haha

Nice, I like the story.
Can't wait to see what happens next.

-- Archerygurl
shiloah18
2009-05-24 . chapter 4
I bet Athrun wouLd rather punch Shinn's face than his precious car.. lol XD

it's cLue.. not gLue.. :)

CagaLLi isn't drunk, Athrun! she is upset though.. >.<v

he Left.. just Like that? -_^ oh nvm.. =.=

not acknowLedging something that reaLLy happened wouLd make things worse, ne?

hmm.. I wonder if Athrun ever wondered that.. when Cags is kiSsing him.. is she thinking of Shinn? or.. has she done the same things with Shinn before?

nyWeiZ, sorry it tOok me so Long to review.. *bows* uh-oh.. Athrun's Lost it.. lol so much for seLf-controL.. XD suteki chaps! demo, is ShinCaga reaLLy back together again? if so, Cags is a two-timer! O_O jaa ne in your next update! ;3

P.S. if you have time.. pLease check out the AMVs my friend made.. there are Links on my profiLe.. pLease teLL us what you think.. if it's not tOo much to ask.. thanks in advance! =3
cottongreentea
2009-02-19 . chapter 4
OMG! It's steamy in here! AHAHA! OMG! I love this chapter! Alot of loving going on in one short chapter! i love it! You get right to the point in everything!

OMG! I hope there's more steaminess later!

I think Shin and Cagalli were putting on a show. They probably made up and are friends now. Cag probably asked SHinn for a favor just so she could get Athrun to admit his feelings and love her. AW! Damn! It's so good!
taylaacheer7
2009-02-16 . chapter 4
o i love it!!
midnight blue08
2009-02-16 . chapter 4
kira's dead i think you should take the chance besides promises are meant to be broken one way or another...
Yumi2001
2009-02-15 . chapter 4
Wow, very hot chapter for Asucaga. Good job! Can't wait to see the next chapter. ^^
cagallifangurl
2009-02-15 . chapter 4
dang! that was petty hot! hehe bout time! i'm liking this story more and more [: please update soon!

2009-01-21 . chapter 3
OH my! AROO! That was really getting hot at the last part of the chapter. LOL! I love it how Athrun thinks of how he would kill Shinn. I do that too sometimes, but not out of jealousy. I do it out of hate. MUAHAHHAHA!A

AW! Cags broke up with Shinn. GOOD! LOL! The pairing jsut looks to weird!

Athrun's smart and thinks ahead. I wouldn't want to wake up next to someone who would say that it was a mistake either.

O! I hope they get more lovey dovey soon! That'll be so aweseom!

Can't wait for the next update!
PinkPrincess511
2009-01-17 . chapter 3
NO! Athrun!
BrownSugarCandy
2009-01-17 . chapter 3
wow..
that ending was intense..
i really can't wait to see what happens next..
i mean does that mean Athrun technacally broke his promise?
but atleast he stopped..
that could actually be good or bad that he stopped..
but enough rambling
i really liked this chapter.
it was calm but ended with that forbidden make-out session..
great job!
The Only Love For Soujiro Seta
2009-01-17 . chapter 3
good follow up!
DAYUM!
2009-01-16 . chapter 3
who! *fans myself* dat was kinda STEAMY! LOL XD GREAT JOB! I REALLY LIKE THIS STORY
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