Good job. You're really good with writing IC emotions and this is a really interesting story!

Awe! I lived this! Very realistic and amazing :) lovely job!

THE MENTAL IMAGE OF BLACK STAR DRUNK AND SINGING "BUTTERFLY" WILL PAINFULLY RESIDE IN MY MIND FOREVER MORE! *steals Mr. Corner from Crona*

Oh I can't wait... eh.. WHAT?! 2 am already?! That sucks) Anyway I can't imagine what will happen when souls parents find out. Hmm there was a fic and I remember Maka's mom coming and saying to Soul "I'm sorry, it's not you it's that these relationships don't last very long" I wonder what will you make up)

MORE MORE MORE MORE NOW!

*cry cry* Soo good good!

LOL that was funny how black star knew way 2 ask!! PLEASE CONTINUE! (LOL I read ur story on my iPod) awesome ^_^

I love this story! PLZ CONTINUE!

OMG?! THE NEXT CHAPPIE IS WHISPERS IN THE DARK! YAY! I <3 that song! ^3^

Aw, poor Soul, hearing that TT^TT

OMG! SOUL-KUN!
DON'T DIE!

THIS HAS BEEN ONE OF MY FAVORITE SOUL X MAKA FANFICS!
YOU ROCK~!

I loved this chapter! It was really cute and happy (like you said). I can't wait for the next chapter. :)

Good work. Know what I really liked, that once the friends found out they stopped the game to talk about it and get all the details cause honestly that's what would happen. I swear for me a game of Truth or Dare never goes by the book so to speak. Nice job. Keep writing.

FFG

the SoulxMaka-ness in this story makes me feel fuzzy inside. I love this story!