This is a nice little AU really. Although I had to second guess myself in assigning who's the bad guy/ good guy in this story, since I haven't played mirror's edge.

I was totally expecting Betty to be in the Blues. Either as a high ranking officer or the commisioner. But I was proven wrong.

Also, I was kinda rankled about how you shuffled the relationship tree. Monique's the BF and Ron's the Douche? For the most part, it kinda works. This being KiGo I should've had a heads up that Kimmie's the lezzie in here.

PLEASE TELL ME YOU WON'T JUST JUMP THIS TWO INTO THE OLD KIGO ROAD OF 'we fight so much hate becomes love' ROUTE. IT DID NOT MAKE SENSE WITH ZUTARA AND BY GOD I'LL BE DAMMED IF I SEE IT HERE!

Ahem.

Maybe make them friends first or ally of convenience first? Not my story, but it get so old when every other does 'slapslapkisskiss' routine.

>.>
Sorry.Rant over. In any case REVIEW!

The prose is well written, though most of the time you tend to ramble and rephrase an idea repeatedly. It's alright when you're describing actions alongside, but it breaks dialogue so badly that I was expecting it to be internal monologues. I'm tempted to name drop here but I won't. The writer rambles so much it's caused me to stop following. And I love a lesbian trio.

You're description of action scenes is very nicely tuned and I know exactly where I am at all times. Kudos to that. Dialogue is funny although most of the time the way you phrase the character's snappy comebacks turn sometimes into scathing territory. I know, I know, jaded cynic Kim is supposed to be angry at the world, but still.

All in all you've got a great story here. Waiting for more.

Let us know if you re-post this chapter in the next chapter, K?

AWESOME! But in the garbage...? I'm looking forward to getting these to alone in the shower as much as the next girl, but... YUCK! You'd want to bathe in fire after being dipped in the unholy hell that is hot, wet garbage.

Shego's sunglasses got off easier than her leathers are going to ;-) I'd hate to be the dry cleaner or to see the bill to try and clean two-piece, most likely custom, leathers. GROSS! But, VERY funny! Being covered in that kind of stink and yuck would take the fight out of anyone (even if you weren't puking your guts out ;-)

Let me guess the title of next chapter: 'A Shower Built for Two' or 'Wash My Back (and front ;-) and I'll Wash Yours' or 'Only enough Hot Water for One Shower ;-)'... And these are only the "Clean" titles I could think of ;-)

Shego must be BEYOND strong, like Super Hero strong, to lift a resisting Kimmie off of the ground, from an armbar/submission hold, to slam her down, repeatedly. The strength required would be Super Human. This begs the question: How much is Shego pulling her punches when they fight? If she has the strength to do that, she could easily kill or cripple Kim, at will, with a punch or kick.

Oh, and... THANKS FOR UPDATING THIS! You've got like a billion other irons in the Fic Fire, but this is at the top of my list of favorites. As always, I wish it were longer. But I wish that of every good piece I read.

NICE BANTER! Your Shego has a deliciously sinful mind ;-) "Rates"... "Money's Worth!?" Hilarious!

I'm interested to know what this "Favor is" that Shego mentioned, why she's doing it?

Well Done; you've wet my appetite for much more.

Oh, and I hope that Bonnie and Tara got away clean (those two are so cute together -any Bonnie/Tara love in the future?). As for Ron... yeah, don't care about cheatin' b@stards.

Another intense chapter from ya. Was it shorter than usual or was it just me craving for more? Aw well, can't complain since this chapter was pleasantly filled with kigo goodness. And nothing like that last bit at the end. All snug in the dumpster, k-i-s-s-i-n-g. Heh, the imagry in my head is quite dirty, rofl.

Oh God they fell into the dumpster hahahaha! Oh I'm sorry I'm just a bit tipsy right now to comment on anything, I've been giggling since i got home and I'm so glad to see you still working on this :D :D

Definitely keep this going! The action makes it difficult to ignore this fic =]

Story still very good, excellent in fact. Few misspellings, but nothing serious. Nothing I can add to my previous reviews, keep it up!

Nice. It sounds like Bonnie and Kim had been an item once upon a time, but petty feelings and misplaced jealousy destroyed it all. Pity. It appears the two girls had something special once, shame it didn't last.

And Bonnie and Tara... I like it. Kim's right: Bonnie should help Tara to be the best she can, especially if they've found love in one another. I do hope both women, Bon Bon and Tara, survive this madness to live and love another day as I like them and their characters.

Shego... looks like you dialed up the Evil to 11. She's certainly ruthless and brutal. But even savage brutes and wild predators can be humbled by love (or lust ;-). Kimmie pushes all of the right buttons in her being, such that, Shego's love/wanting the redhead is only a short matter of time given her nature for action once her minds made up.

Ron... don't care.

Hench and the Blues... yeah, these d-bags need to go down. Hard.

Ya, more action, lovin it, I wonder how it's going to turn out. Can't wait for your next update.

Kigo! Hot :)

I'm so curious with the past! I'm getting an inkling of what went on, I hate to assume things though, ruins the surprise ;)

Next chapter should be oh so good~

Ara, I was gonna head to bed after two hours of playing Combat Arms (don't judge me, none of us writers REALLY have lives!), but I just HAD to check my email and saw you updated, so I convinced my sore blood-shot eyes to endure staring at this too-bright screen in a dark room just a bit longer. Oh, the endurance! (lol) But let me tell you, it was well worth it. To read Kim and Shego get their hands all over each other.. (sighs dreamily) I'm going to go pass out now. XP

Yay Shego pov

Continued good writing and storytelling, keep it up.

awesomeness!
I cant wait for the next chapter!
And thx for the chapter

Alright, I put most of the pieces togther and now it's time for Shego and Kim to meet again. Amazing update can't wait for more.

Driving in the city, going for torque and quick speed over short distances (a few city blocks) or cornering (esp. on a U-Turn), you'd shift DOWN (or stay in the same gear, considering she'd be in 2nd or 3rd) not up. Higher gears are for top speeds and cruising. I don't know the R8's specific clutch or gearing, but Shego might have stalled -but she certainly would have been slower, not faster.

Ah... not familiar with Mirror's Edge I must assume they live in some strange Totalitarian Dictatorship City-State that masquerades as progress and "democracy" when in fact what they offer is a brutal and oppressive police-state ala the old Soviet Russia or Communist China. Needless to say, they are some of my least favorite people. Ever.

HAPPY DAY! It sounds like Ron got shot!? Good Chapter! And Shego's got the scent of her favorite Redhead... YUMMY! ;-) I wonder just how much fun they'll have for round two ;-) or if round three (and beyond) takes place between the sheets ;-)

A girl can hope.

Also, do we learn any more about Tara and Bonnie's relationship?