Hmm, a little short, and too quick, if you get what I mean. Most people really draw any X/Tayuya trust and friendship building out.

i wish there were more naru/tayu stories. i cant agree with you more that its an amazing pairing and even if she isnt with naruto i rly like tayuya. too bad she got killed off in the cannon :(

You have something interesting here that I wish other people will use. The fact that Tayuya is a lot like Kushina and Naruto is a lot like his dad.

A beautifull and very entertaining story. To bad they killed her off.

EWW! blonde colored facial hair, creepy! aside form that great i love naruxtayu

(stands up and claps) Well done!

A nice but short story, I found another Tayuya x Naruto but I found this one more amusing and nice. Truly fulfilling story about two people who grew in similar circumstances.

great story
hope you make another narutoXtayuya fic

nice short sweet and to the point i liked it

this story is actually pretty good

That was better than sex.

chapter 2 was good & chapter 3 was just alright.

Good ending. Can;t wait to see what your going to do next:)

Great story. Thanks for it.

Great chapter:)