I'm very happy you finished it. Though it took you a year, it finally paid off in the end. Excellent work.

Don't worry. I'll always be here to review your work. You did great Shelby.

Aww, maybe Jose WILL find a nice present for Shelby

This is looking good so far. Continue soon and don't give up. I'm working on a story to if you want to check it out. It's going to be a major crossover.

This is very good honey. I'm looking forward to more.

Wlac got what he deserved, I sure hope things will be al right.

Yeah, serves Vlad right, hope Jake and Jose get the money they need on time, the same with you and Chris. Great job and good luck!:)

AW! I finally got what I wanted and me and daddy (Bonkers) are very happy. Please, keep going!

I know daddy will, I always believe in him even my real world daddy :) I can't wait for more. Please, keep going!

Wow, that's great, can't wait for the final story. Great job and good luck!:)

Wow, Bonkers will do anything to prove Erin that Santa's real. Great job and good luck!:)

Nice job on this story party, I look forward to the final one

Wow. This is amazing. I love this. I'm happy you got to work on this. Looking forward to more.

Wow, wonder what will happen to Erin and Bonkers now? Great job and good luck!:)

I LOVE IT! I can't wait for the next part and who cares about what Banzai said, I still believe.