omg. i dont even know what to say abotu this. this was just so angsty...althoguh, the leaving part confused me, thguh thats prbably becasue i never bothered to watch gluhen. ^o^
lol i thgink htat i'm probably going to review everyone one of your fics that i read jsut to say how awesome and sad htey are.

Holy Cow! I ... really don't know what to say. This was just so great I don't think I can write a proper comment. I've really come to like your take on Aya and Yohji way too much. I really can hear their voices when I read your fics, they're perfectly in character and the story is very well written. I really appreciate the fluency of the words through the story and the easiness of the transition between POVs.

The story line was simply beautiful, the ending was very fitting, and I just adore the title. I'll be looking forward to reading more of your work.

Well just because they can't, I sure can cry over their "nothing". No! Come back! Pleaase! Oh man, perfectly timed and spaced and the ending was the perfect bitter sweet wrap up. I loved it :)

The end was beautiful, and left me thinking "what would be next time?" If they would meet again, would they have something? This story didn't seem to have any places without meaning, but it all lead up to the inevitable: heartbreak and hope. A part of me wanted there to be something this time, but it would just be too out of character. I nearly cried. Thanks for the story, i hope you continue your good work.

heartbreaking

Damn you, you actually made me tear up a bit. I'm just gonna pretend it's my cold that's all... ;)

I liked how the repetiveness served to hammer in the depth of their denial. You had a lot of really good lines. Some of the bits I liked:
"Yohji thought maybe he should start keeping track of them."
"There was just a lot of dust."
And, I thought there was soemthing great about Yohji's last words to Aya being to tell him not to die. Very real and relatable.

So...there's gonna be a "This time" sequal, right?

wow... talk about denial~ or was it? idk, this fic had many head turnin point, interesting...though sad, loved the endin... maybe they both needed good shake to make them realise, so they wouldnt need to wait till nex life
thanks for the story, keep it up-- ^^