It is a good story. But there is one big problem. Why din't you or authoressnebula finish this story? You know write a 2 part to it? Start the 2 part where this story left off. And what happen after they got to there room and after Sam got better go after what ever took Sam and those other people. And find out what did it and see them get rid of it. Now if both you and authoressnebula had done that then you and authoressnebula. would be awesome writer. But to leave it like that you two are only good writers with this story. It is not right where you two left it at. I do hope the other stories I want to read of yours does not end the why this one did.

this story was just amazing. it definitely made me do that little "aww how cute" smile that i USED to do when watching the show :] can't wait to check out some of your other stories! i'm so glad you got the chance to write this one in dean's perspective!

LOVE it.

Nice companion piece! I enjoyed it very much.

It fits perfectly with Nebula's, but it completely works as a stand alone piece.

Great job!

Wow, straight to 'Favourites' this one goes! That was an amazing little gem, thank you for sharing! I thought it was superbly well written, and I loved how you included meticulous little details such as how Sam got pins and needles when he got out. That kind of detail really brings the story and setting to life. I also loved the emotive language as Dean reflects whilst holding Sam.

This was my favourite part:

“I don’t want you trailing behind me,” he replied firmly, wrapping his arm around Sam’s shoulders again, this time more in reassurance than anything. “I’ve kinda gotten used to you hunting beside me.”

So in character and so heart warming :)

Big pat on the back for you!

I followed nebs' LJ link over here and she wasn't wrong.

This was great.

Thoroughly enjoyed it.

Great job! Especially love the brotherly moments! :o)

Kelcor

Wonderful little story...absolutely loved it. Good job.

Denise

Aw, very cute ending. Terrifying in the middle, but cute ending. I've SO got to go read the story this one was based off of. Great job!

That was awesome and now I'm off to find Sam's point of view. Thanks for a great read, I've been looking for one for a while.

I LOVE this story Mo! So well done! You write the characters wonderfully and Dean's protectiveness is awesome! Thank you for writing this!

Very nice piece to Authoress's. I enjoyed both and loved the protective big brother side of Dean. And of course, frantic Sammy is always a treat.

Great job!

Wow, I have to say I am really impressed. You did a wonderful job of showing the other side of this story, of weaving your original stuff and the pre-existing story, dialogue, etc. seamlessly together. Loved seeing Dean's side of things. This was really well-written too. Good job!

Excellent, excellent work. I came over here after authoressnebula recced this story in her LiveJournal.

Nice Dean voice. :) It is a perfect companion.

I...oh. Oh oh OH.

This was it. THIS WAS IT. You managed to look inside my head and see exactly what I wanted but didn't know how to put into words. (While you were in there, you didn't happen to notice where the memory of where my sunglasses went is, did you?)

But this was beautiful. Absolutely beautiful, and spot-on Dean. You freakin' NAILED IT sweetie, and I've never been happier or prouder that my story inspired something.

Thank you so much for asking to do this, and thank you for doing the wonderful job that you did. I am so honored that my little fic inspired such a fantastic twin.

Nebula