I love this. Write me another chapter...NOW! Hahahahaha. No but seriously, this is pretty amazing. I hate first person fanfics but I love this one with a flaming passion as much as Roger and Mark are flaming ponces for each other. So write please! Much love, Rani

Wow. What a way to end the chapter. That sort of cliffie needs to be updated! We all want to know what happens next. ;)

About time we got an update!

Good, although there are a few things. About halfway through, the story becomes italicized for no apparent reason. Also, "I could almost feel the moisture when you licked his lips." Who is his exactly?

Yay! Roger! Very exciting. Waiting for the next chapter!

best.story.ever.period

That's okay, I do it all the time. I really love this update though. Please do it again soon?

Oh my GOD! This is amazingly wonderful. I can't wait for your updates. All of your fics that I've read so far have been great. Truly heartwrenching...in a good way. :)

Awesome fic I like jacob but i'm a mark/roger fan so i hope they get together. update soon

You have to update soon! That was so intense.
The love triangle is so fantastic, it was a great idea to bring another character into the picture; like Jacob.
Great job! :))

Wow. That was hot, and Roger's an idiot. He needs to pick one person...

EK! So much DRAMA! HOT SEXY SLASH! WANT MORE!

Keep Going!

Tis getting really good!

-Patsy

more!! lovin the story so far.

Was looking forward to this updating, can't wait until the next chapter.

Only major comment is that there are several spelling/grammar mistakes.

*SQUEAL* Holy crap! Roger made a move!! WHOOT! I'm psyched!!

GREAT JOB! KEEP GOING!

-Patsy

Oh, he's an **! Roger doesn't want to be with Mark, he wants to be with Mimi, but he also loves Mark, and because Mark's not with him, he can't be with anyone?! Is he really telling his best friend, the friend that's been there for him through everything to be unhappy so he isn't?! Doesn't he realize that Mark already sacrifices enough for him?!! This is what I hate about the other characters in Rent, they all take Mark and his sacrifices for granted.

Great chapter!