From string theory to chaos-which by the way is one of my fave movies with Jason Statham an dRyan Phillippe-and that's a rant-sorry. See, I'm no science or math wiz, but I pride myself on being open and I am really enjoying this story. You're dying? I hope not-your readers need you! Feel better and know what you do matters.

Well people are probably complaning because they never took the clases to understand your way of writing but I for one like because it sepreates you from the rest from the other.

Screw the people saying the technical stuff is bad, it's a unique take on how Juno thinks and is damn interesting to read to boot.

Keep up the good work. :)

You write beautifully, and this story is addictive.

Marry me?

them, the technical stuff makes it beautiful.

Ah, c'mon, people! I'm no numbers or math expert, but a top pilot would need to be and its her sanity maintence especially with quiet broody boy there and her feeling of never being what her father wanted. So, look beyond the tech stuff and see to the rich tapestry beneath. Thanks _I enjoyed it.

Hi, this is like being in class learning all over again and yet within the perimters of the game I was amazed at how well Sam Witwer did as Starkiller-to be able to project so well-and I only bring it up because your story evokes the same visceral feeling in me. Glad there's another as this was too short!

I don't understand any of that technical stuff but hell it is an interesting read anyway.

Who are you kidding? I love the crazy math stuff! I may not understand it, but it makes us normal humans balk in awe at the depth of the genius that is Juno.

So, yes I agree that the math stuff would be how Juno thinks.

I like how Starkiller is portrayed as well. It's like he's struggling to be - well, normal. I like that a whole lot.

Keep at it!

Akira

Can't say I understand any of that technical mumble jumble but it is a great story anyway. :D

Love it.

Love love love it!

I love your writing, I really do.

I especially love how you describe the Apprentice as shy because that totally makes sense with him. He does stike me as someone who would be hopelessly awkward around others.

Yay for hopelessly awkward heroes!

Akira

This is really interesting dynamics you are building and what she learnde in class, although way over my head, ties everything together. I am interested to see where this is going. Good job!

I am so blown away-I felt like it was a mixture of SW and Numbers one of my fave TV shows where Charlie a math wiz sees everything mathmatically. Juno's calculations were so over my head-heh. Loves the description you gave of Starkiller's ruthless, liquid grace. Sam Witwer so won me over with his portrayal. I am glad to see a write of your caliber is writing a Force Unleashed story. Please tell me more is coming!

AWESOME!