|Reviews for Meditations on Natural Philosophy|
| Jen DeClan 12/16/08 . chapter 5
From string theory to chaos-which by the way is one of my fave movies with Jason Statham an dRyan Phillippe-and that's a rant-sorry. See, I'm no science or math wiz, but I pride myself on being open and I am really enjoying this story. You're dying? I hope not-your readers need you! Feel better and know what you do matters.
| Mandalore18 12/14/08 . chapter 4
Well people are probably complaning because they never took the clases to understand your way of writing but I for one like because it sepreates you from the rest from the other.
| TheBlackBaron 12/13/08 . chapter 4
Screw the people saying the technical stuff is bad, it's a unique take on how Juno thinks and is damn interesting to read to boot.
Keep up the good work. :)
| Ra'iira The Fiend 12/13/08 . chapter 3
You write beautifully, and this story is addictive.
| Ra'iira The Fiend 12/13/08 . chapter 4
them, the technical stuff makes it beautiful.
| Jen DeClan 12/13/08 . chapter 4
Ah, c'mon, people! I'm no numbers or math expert, but a top pilot would need to be and its her sanity maintence especially with quiet broody boy there and her feeling of never being what her father wanted. So, look beyond the tech stuff and see to the rich tapestry beneath. Thanks _I enjoyed it.
| Jen DeClan 12/13/08 . chapter 3
Hi, this is like being in class learning all over again and yet within the perimters of the game I was amazed at how well Sam Witwer did as Starkiller-to be able to project so well-and I only bring it up because your story evokes the same visceral feeling in me. Glad there's another as this was too short!
| Lord Europe 12/13/08 . chapter 4
I don't understand any of that technical stuff but hell it is an interesting read anyway.
| Akira Serenada 12/13/08 . chapter 4
Who are you kidding? I love the crazy math stuff! I may not understand it, but it makes us normal humans balk in awe at the depth of the genius that is Juno.
So, yes I agree that the math stuff would be how Juno thinks.
I like how Starkiller is portrayed as well. It's like he's struggling to be - well, normal. I like that a whole lot.
Keep at it!
| Lord Europe 12/11/08 . chapter 2
Can't say I understand any of that technical mumble jumble but it is a great story anyway. :D
| Ra'iira The Fiend 12/7/08 . chapter 2
Love love love it!
| Akira Serenada 12/7/08 . chapter 2
I love your writing, I really do.
I especially love how you describe the Apprentice as shy because that totally makes sense with him. He does stike me as someone who would be hopelessly awkward around others.
Yay for hopelessly awkward heroes!
| Jen DeClan 12/7/08 . chapter 2
This is really interesting dynamics you are building and what she learnde in class, although way over my head, ties everything together. I am interested to see where this is going. Good job!
| Jen DeClan 12/1/08 . chapter 1
I am so blown away-I felt like it was a mixture of SW and Numbers one of my fave TV shows where Charlie a math wiz sees everything mathmatically. Juno's calculations were so over my head-heh. Loves the description you gave of Starkiller's ruthless, liquid grace. Sam Witwer so won me over with his portrayal. I am glad to see a write of your caliber is writing a Force Unleashed story. Please tell me more is coming!