It's not bad.
It's not very bad.
It's not passable.
It's VERY FUNNY!

Lol!!XD
Girly-man!XD

i loved it

Lol! Hallelujah's evil XD But it's also Setsuna's fault for being so gullible XD But I guess that's part of his charm isn't it.

Haha, I love the end part, you got everyone's personalities down perfectly, from Lockon's "oi oi" to Alle's whacking of Halle to Haro's chirping ^__^

Lmao. Setsuna's very bully material ^^ A nice one.

~M

*headdesk* Oh man...:b