 ReJo 2008-12-04 . chapter 1Love it, especially how you parallel Lena's saving kids to Danny's predicament. |
 DAnNSfreak 2008-12-02 . chapter 1Yes, definitely. ;-) Great story! Yes, we all love the writers again! Let's hope this will be Danny's decision on the show too. Great story! |
 BlueEyedAuthor 2008-12-01 . chapter 1i liked this, what a good story! |
 JESSMARY25 2008-12-01 . chapter 1I love it! Interesting take on what happen on The Box, I like being surprise by you not having one of the members of the team being the one that got through Danny. Awesome twist and pretty cool OC. |
 ImaSupernaturalCSI 2008-12-01 . chapter 1"I wanna be somebody's hero."
I loved that line. This was great, how it takes a kid to make adults see things the way they really are. This was really good, I enjoyed it. |