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The Songfictionistas
2009-11-16 . chapter 4
Oh come on Tomo! I have no idea if you're still updating any of your stories, but you leave us with that ending!? I know this one hasn't been updated since '08 but please! at least one more chapter!
Anaweir
2009-10-21 . chapter 1
nice use of the word androgynous I'll still read if you still write
sharlie25
2009-09-12 . chapter 4
Please update this soon. It is a seriously (no pun intended) good piece of writing that had me laughng all the way through, my only thing was I thought that James should have reacted a little more violently to Lily's betrayal of his friends. Other than that I found this very amusing and a excellent piece of writing and I hope you continue it soon.
Karl-Bertilla
2009-08-25 . chapter 4
Lily seems a little ooc o.o Or I don't know, but in my head she's a nice person (except to James) that wouldn't judge anyone just cause they were gay. Anyway, CAN'T WAIT FOR NEXT CHAPTER! <3 Really like this story.
Moowny
2009-08-01 . chapter 4
So cute and funny and everything, I love it. :D But you've made me like Lily much less, how could she do that?
lalala
2009-07-27 . chapter 4
wah no update update update! Totally unfair to have not have finished this story. AGH! HATE LILY! SHE WAS KINDA COOL BEFORE! HOMOPHOBIC #$&*%! You better make her apologize! And heheh, it would be cool if Dumbledore said, "It's alright boys. I'm not exactly straight either" <- but more funnier cuz I can't think of any gay anologies right now. That how it spelt? W/e you know what I mean. Update soon! And gr please don't make it all angsty! It romance/humour keep it in mind! It nice to know yer writing it. HURRY UP THO! I want Remus and Sirius to be happy ever after! Gr hate Lily. *hugz Remus and Sirius* I'll protect you
Remus: you're a girl
Me: Ya? So? Are you denying that you too aren't hot and perfect for eachother that even a straight girl loves you two together?
Sirius: Er no.
Me: Glad that's settled then. :)
lalala
2009-07-27 . chapter 1
Lol. Had me laughing a whole bunch. Really descriptive and funny and random. I actually posted a quote on facebook. "You look like you spent the night in a blender. A blender full of soft but violent pillows. ;D" Hehe no one knows how to comment on THAT
Ican'tDenyYou
2009-07-22 . chapter 1
Gah! I'm seriously scared! Me and my friends act the same! So weird! >_>
Nice chap! *gives thumbs up*
etake
2009-07-21 . chapter 4
Seeing as how there are four chapters I couldn't wait and so I read them all at once, and now I'm kind of reviewing them all at the end of the fourth one, that's sensible isn't it? :L

LOL> The idea of Sirius greeting McGonagall with "My love!" literally made me laugh out loud, I'm a bit embarrased now :D ..As did the fact that 'hiding' their gayness from Lily and Peter involves being muchly openly gay and talking about sweet sweet love-making a lot :D :D (Next they should do some)(Also on that note, I did wonder why they hid it from Peter but not James..?)
Also when Sirius sang Michael Buble to Remus. Tee hee.

The banter! The banter! Oh this is the best thing about the whole fic. Asides from the luffly Sirius/Remus-ness ofc ;)DON'T STOP THE BANTER, PLEASE.

No Lily :( Oh no! Summonsed to Dumbledore's office! Ack!Can't wait for Chapter Five! *salutes* And sorry about the stupid length of this -_-
LURVEuALL
2009-06-24 . chapter 4
LILY IS SUCH A BITCH!
she should die, oh wait she did and now i know why she deserves it
please please update soon
THEY CANT BE EXPELLED! NO
forgot to set this on an alert so i'll just do that now
Ardespuffy
2009-05-17 . chapter 4
The way characters act in this story is far more than great, and I absoluteley adore it... but I hardly see a point in keeping this on if you're no longer inspired. You're just deluding your readers.
(And WTF is wrong with Lily, by the way? O__O)
TheThreeSexyMusketeers
2009-04-05 . chapter 4
WAH!
I NEED THE NEXT CHAPTER!
:(
You had better write it soon or I'll cry. And never give you cookies. And I make goddam good cookies so you're missing out.
ANY WHO!
Thanks for the story. It's amazing and it gave me a wonderful idea for my English homework. My story now includes marmalade. Hopefully my teacher won't poke me in the nose with a popsicle! (She's very strict, and she doesn't believe in random things. Horrible, I know.)
Alas, I believe that this review has dragged on long enough.
Thanks again for the story!
bloodydarkwolf
2009-03-31 . chapter 4
sweet damn jesus baby juice im so sorry i havent reviewed. its such a cute story its funny but now we have reached the "oh conflict" part and...and...wait wasnt Dumbledor pronounced gay a while ago by J.K. Rowlings?...i dunno but still this chapter did not suck but Lily in this chapter sure did. i hope youre not done and again im sorry i didnt review. may i be stung with a million killerbees and stuck in a pool of melted gummy bears before being lashed with the cruelest of licorice laces and rubbed with leamon juice while choking on peanut butter and...im hungry now...damn my train of thought crashed again. well anyways im done. P.S.please dont be alarmed by this insane rant. i must go put on the jacket that makes me hug myself now. bye
rosesxnxrain
2009-03-12 . chapter 4
wtf?

i'm confused

luv ur story tho
Tonkswyrda
2009-02-27 . chapter 4
this story is puew brilliance. i love it :P cant wait for the next chapter :D hope they dont get expelled!!
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