 ErnestTheGuy 2009-06-22 . chapter 4i cant believe i skipped this one the first time thru, i feel so stupid since this one here is awesome.i guess Wade and Joss get a happy ending? anyway, you gotta have the conversation with James telling Anne that he knew written up. Anne grilling him about what happened is gonna be awesome. |
 Etherelemental 2008-12-24 . chapter 4That was interesting. I especially liked the bits with James figuring things out. And the bits about the scientists who worked on the device kept forgetting what they were working on. You'd think they'd eventually have someone else to test it on and keep recordings of what they were doing and working on. But no matter. I'm quite interested in seeing what other fics involving things like that will be. I'm sure they'll be quite entertaining. |
 Invader Johnny 2008-12-23 . chapter 4Ah everything is noe explained! figures a Possible would try to fix everything heh.
Invader Johnny Signing Off. |
 TripleS 2008-12-22 . chapter 4 KiY, I loved this one. The conversation was a little hard to follow- but it made me feel like I was in James' shoes. Great work. :) |
 A Markov 2008-12-22 . chapter 4Well done! This story was a lot of fun. Well crafted and woven into your overall arc very nicely. I think you handled James very well and Jane is starting to emerge as her own character.
I like the way you give us tastes of other parts of the overall arc.
Alex |
 noncynic 2008-12-21 . chapter 4Very nice ending. And Ron...is going to be Ron, no matter what anyone does. James going to warn Kim about Jane's boyfriend? Why doesn't he let her experience the surprise the same way he did? Nah. |
 eoraptor 2008-12-21 . chapter 4yay for the end! |
 Mr. Wizard 2008-12-21 . chapter 4Cute ending. I like James' little peek into the future. As always the dialog was wonderful. |
 ginna5683 2008-12-16 . chapter 3haha were they really just about to arrest someone with a doughnut? seriously. thats funny. this was so so great i dont know where to start!! great job with this story the kids always make me happy |
 Etherelemental 2008-12-14 . chapter 3That's going to be an interesting explanation for how they're weapons. Although, they're certainly not very threatening looking. I'm also wondering what the reasons they're really there. I mean, I know what the story has said, but as far as I can really tell, they're going off of information that hasn't been released, so it could easily be a simple misunderstanding, such as unauthorized time travel or something, or even the criminals actually being around, but not those three. Anyway, I hope to see more soon! |
 Bladed Darkness 2008-12-14 . chapter 3Oh dear, that last bit was confusing. And I feel sorry for Mr. Dr. P., being torn between wanting to know and afraid of finding out too much information he may not be comfortable with at that time. |
 Invader Johnny 2008-12-14 . chapter 3Surelt Dr. Possible HAS to believe that he has two future granddaughters, after all the stuff he has seen from Kim“s like as a heroine THIS should NOT be too far off for him.
Invader Johnny Signing Off. |
 noncynic 2008-12-14 . chapter 3Well, it's amusing, and still a little confusing. 'Team J', anyway, Keep thinking I need to go back through your stories because I missed or forgot something. Anyway, still liking it. |
 eoraptor 2008-12-14 . chapter 3a very fun chapter, you've got just the right amount of whine and innocent ignorance in the kids so they don't sound too smart for their roles. |
 Sobriety 2008-12-14 . chapter 3This story continues to be a lot of fun. Love the fact that while Kasy and Sheki are resourceful little Possibles, they still act like kids. |