Great story. I don't care how long it takes I'll wait for the updates!
It's so refreshing to see a great story with Tifa/Sephiroth, and I think you did very well in capturing his character(especially when he's sane).
It's also great to see Angeal as a big part of the story. I loved reading it so far and honestly, could never guess right where the story was about to go, and that I love the most.
Great work, and keep up the awsomness.

This is one of the best Sephti stories ive read. Plz update soon!

You are my god 8D


OMFG so pwn this story has me dancing round my house.

YES SEPHY AND TIFA WWOT!

will chaka find out that Fry is a girl too xD

GOO TIFA!

God, you're brilliant, do you know that?
"The fat was in the fire and sizzling madly." It's lines like this that just really make this story for me. I mean, it's wonderful regardless, but you have a gift of using lines like that that just add so much more life to the story. You definitely have a truly unique, marvelous style.

And, you've got Hojo down to a T. Creepy, indeed. That was the only thing I could think when I played Crisis Core, and it showed him for the first time. You've really heightened that image for me in a way that was both humorous yet terrifying. Clearly, the "good" doctor's got some plans in the works... Ugh...

The mob scene was quite dramatic. The guy that spit in Sephiroth's face deserved that punch of Tifa's. I mean, he was within his rights to say what he did if he was involved with Nibelheim, but... Spitting in someone's face is just the epic crossing of the Trashy line.

Hooray for showing Cid for a bit. He's always good for a laugh. :)

The training program was great! I laughed aloud hearing about Tifa beating him. "Sephiroth still wasn't speaking to her." Hahaha, I love it when imposing guys like him just get this childish side to them. Too funny! As are your dream sequences as well. I feel that they are quite fitting to the story.
Will Dev spill the beans about Tifa's secret or will Angeal take care of all that in the meeting with him? Hmm...curious. Oh, and nice work for bringing Yuffie and Chaka back...together. Best combo ever, really. But why is Yuffie trying to get into Tifa's room in the first place? Is it about the materia or something more personal, like Zach, perhaps?

Anyway, great addition to your story. I loved it! And don't sweat it on how long it takes to update. I honestly don't notice it, and personally, I'm content as long as you just keep updating rather than how often. :) Keep up the amazing work!

Alright, first let me say how sorry am I for not reviewing this chapter until now. I have no other excuse than the truth: I have been lazy and defiant, and I apologize. I never thought that I could achieve procrastination with something that I like to do, but alas...

Anyway, I absolutely loved this chapter! It was very enlightening and really intense. Again, you have a good balance of every available genre here. I loved how you introduced Vincent, too. I think it's really fantastic how you're having all the canon characters meeting each other in very un-canon-like circumstances. It's something Final Fantasy VII fans are familiar with, but it's also a fresh perspective, too. Excellent work!

So, Jenova's still alive, eh? DUN DUN DUN! I thought it had been too easy for Tifa to totally destroy her before. Needless to say, you've got me excited for where this goes.

The Cloud/Aerith scene at the end made me feel so much, too, by the way. I was happy that the two met in such a way; it was very cute. But I was also really sad for Tifa since she had to see it. Poor girl... Sephiroth's reaction was heart-wrenching as well. They're both beginning to feel something, even if they haven't realized that it's for each other, huh?

Anyway, I'm off to read your next chapter. Sorry again for holding out on you.

I'm beyond delighted to find another excellent story by you. Have to say that this one is fast becoming one of my fave FF fics and since discovering it a day or so ago, I've read it at least twice just to make sure I haven't missed anything! Is it wrong of me to wish their hair really had been braided together?! Sephiroth's reaction would have been to-die-for! Am looking forward to the next chapter. Excellent stuff, Faerlyte!

this story is excellent!

Please update soon

Oh...Their return kinda made me a little teary.

I'm glad that Angeal's kinda cool knowing Tifa's Tifa. xD
There seems to be an increasing number of people discovering her gender. I wonder what'll happen...

Oh, her dream's yummy. And HAHA Chaka's back! Lol.

Haha. Happy holidays to you too. xD
Lol, yes. I have no qualms for this story to be lengthy.

Okay first this question has been plaguing me for quite sometime now: Do Tifa's dreams have any specific meaning to them or are they in the story just for the heck of it? it's not like I think their annoying or anything, I'm just curious about it lol! Their actually pretty amusing. Oh and I also don't get why Sephiroth was mad at her the first time in this chapter? Other than those two questions this chapter was awesome! What a cliff hanger that was, poor Tifa I wonder how she's going to handle anyone else who knows her true identity. I can't wait till your next update! Please update soon! P.S: The part with Yuffie getting caught was hilarious! :D

Woah, Sephiroth is quite sassy. And Hojo. *shudder* Nice job with the freakiness which is he. I'm quite curious as to what Hojo is cooking up.

I held my breath when I was reading about the mob and that old man. I was so worried Sephiroth would remember something.

The training scenario was brilliant. Tifa winning, even more so. :D

Oh! And Tifa having more people knowing she's a woman is very scary. Just another thing to add to her list of problems. Though, I was surprised at how well Angeal took it. Then again, he never seemed out for her.

Yay, Chaka is back! I can't wait (no, I really can and will) to find out what's going on at Tifa's door. I can hazard a guess, but I think the real thing will be much more amusing.

As always, it's a pleasure to read your work. :)

YAY! An Update! Loved this chapter, there is nothing I can say that I haven't said before about this story. I love it! Keep it up please!

Nice chapter. Good style and flow. Especially like how Tifa's gender was revealed to Chaka, Dez & Angeal. Nice plot twists. Only pet peeve is the use of numbers in the script like '“Not 30 minutes ago.”' or 'There were 21 people standing...' instead of the proper written words 'thirty' and 'twenty one'. Other examples are used properly like height '5'7' etc, or telling the time '7.00 p.m' or '3rd class Soldier'. But try to use the word equivalent when mentioning numbers of people, or minutes in reference to time, it's a basic rule of thumb for any form of writing.

A few minor spelling mistakes like 'Solidier' instead of 'soldier' but overall. Pretty good.

Yuffie caught, huh ?

Oh my God! Christmas has come early! I LOVE long chapters! The longer the better, and this one? Perfect! So many things I loved about it: Corporal Midge's anxiety, the entire scene in the training room - "I do not bat for the other team." - my jaw nearly landed in my lap. Making Dev eat his own teeth, the heart-to-heart with Angeal...Did I mention the training room? He is so unbelievably...*sighs* words fail me.

Have a wonderful holiday! Merry Christmas!

I'm reading this again!

You're back! Or should I say, "You've been back! It's just taken me this long to read your chapter." Not the actual reading, of course. Merely the time it took for me to catch up on my alerts. Forgive me. I was salivating (figuratively) for a new chapter, and when it was finally given, I was slow on the uptake. Shame on me. But I'm babbling...

I can see why you'd have your stomach in knots over this, but you really shouldn't. Well written as usual. VERY well written! I'm so glad you have included Vincent. It's like being reacquainted with an old friend.

On to chapter 13...