 James 2009-12-14 . chapter 43 Hi, I just read this entire series, beginning with 'here with you' up to this point, in the last couple of weeks and I think it's fantastic. I am a man in his 20's who's a complete softie and loves troyella and hsm and you really bring them to life wonderfully. I can't wait to see how you deal with this development as it is the first really bad thing that's happened - the innocence of troyella is now gone and I can't wait to see how you deal with that. This is way more serious than if troy had made out with someone else, will she be able to look at him the same ever again? You can see how enraptured I am - it's because you are a wonderful writer and I want to thank you for bringing alive a set of characters who really inspired me in the movies.
Well done, you are inspiring people and should feel proud. Hope your talents can get things back to normal with them - I for one don't know how they could but you're the awesome writer! :)
look forward to fnding out! Happy holidays! X |
 zanessa4evr12 2009-12-13 . chapter 43wow..i dnt even no wat to say..its just..wow..poor gabriella...this was an amazingly written chapter...it was strong, descriptive, and u really culd feel her pain. great job |
 Inky Hula 2009-12-09 . chapter 43Oh wow, the plot just keeps getting better and better.
Your writing has so many intricacies, it's amazing. You manage to invoke feelings of sympathy and empathy in the readers and you really make us feel like we understand all of the characters.
I feel like you characterized Troy and Gabriella and their I suspect other people do too.parents *especially* well in this chapter. You're right--Gabriella could never hate Troy, they were made for each other, but that doesn't mean that she's not still extremely upset. And Troy of course would grovel and be persistent. But I want her to make him work for her trust back again, as I think other people do too.
Good for his parents taking away some of his privileges. Troy in general is a good kid, and thus hasn't had that many severe punishments before, I guess--so it's a good experience for him. I feel so sorry for him though, it's all because he made a stupid mistake because he was way too drunk, but at the same time it's his fault he drank so much. His text couldn't help but make me "aw" and sigh though.
I realy can't wait for the next chapter--update when you can. :) |
 Samantha 2009-12-06 . chapter 43 Awesome chapter Dani! You are doing such a wonderful job and I have loved every chapter you have posted. I have to go on the record and say I am sorry that people are pressuring you to post more often. You are already doing a remarkable job and deserve to be able to take the time you need to write and also have a life. I can only imagine how hectic your schedule is. So thank you for posting as often as you do! Alright onto the chapter... I must say that though I am still disappointed in Troy, I am torn much like Gabriella. And his text message at the end sealed the deal for me. Even though he was an idiot that night, he knows it was a mistake and regrets it. I really hope they talk soon and work through the situation together. On a side note, I loved how Gabriella, even though she was hurt and upset with him, couldn't walk away when he was sick. She still took care of him. That truly shows how deep and meaningful their relationship is. As for Chase and Ryan, I am really loving their relationship. I enjoy their dynamic and it really shows a different side to Ryan that I am thoroughly enjoying. Anyway I don't have much else to add. I apologize for the late review but life on my end continues to be pure chaos. Take care my dear and update when you and only you are ready. |
 WyszLo 2009-12-06 . chapter 43Ok, I must admit I was terrified to read this after the way you left the last chapter.
It wasn't nearly as bad as I imagined. Thank goodness...
I think Gabi is reacting the most logical way, and the most constructive way for their relationship. I actually really like how she's handling the situation.
And Troy...
You can't excuse what he did, but I feel so sorry for him! I was so happy that he expressed how horrible he felt right away to Gabi when he woke up.
Oh, and the text at the end was one of the sweetest things you've ever written about them, even though they're in a fight. I loved it.
Really, it was a wonderful chapter over all!
I can't wait to see Troy and Gabi talk. I really hope they'll be ok. I don't know if I'LL be ok if they're not haha!
I'm looking forward to the next update!
~Lauren |
 LikeLavender 2009-12-06 . chapter 40Yay zeke/sharpay. You write her so well, by the way!! And man, I hnestly never thought I would ever be sad for Jason, but man. I am! Poor guy. He probably did something stupid though, huh? I'm not gonna lie, I kind of don't feel bad for martha, but I get where she's coming from?
Anyway, I really love this story. |
 LikeLavender 2009-12-06 . chapter 39So I absolutely love the fact that sharpay is slowly becoming nice! I really never thoght I'd say that either, since I have such a love for bitchy-sharpay-with-a-heart-of-gold. Poor Kelsi.
And Ive just got to say that your abiliy to explain where people go and what they do without getting bogged down and just like listing..he did that and then she did this. You know? Yeah. I'm sorry this is so rambly, but I realy enjoyed this chapter and I'm kind of happy I waited so now I have like four more to read :) I'm excited for the party |
 We'reBreakingFree 2009-12-05 . chapter 43This chapter was really good. I love it how you portrayed how much Gabriella loves Troy, and how she couldn't bear to see him in pain. I think that it is so sweet that no matter how hurt she is, her love for him will always win. I'm glad Troy realizes that he screwed up big time. It is sad that he tried to drink his way out of the situation and now he does not remember the whole sistuation. He shouldn't get a lesser punishment becuase he is not completely aware of what happened, becuase when he did it, he wasn't as smashed as he was in the morning. I did love the ending that text was cute, can't wait to see what happens next chapter. |
 speedsONEandONLY 2009-12-05 . chapter 43i may not agree wit what Troy did,
but im happy that he texted her before going to bed.
and the flowers.
did he get permission,
or did he take without asking?
i like Chase.
hes a perfect addition.
so,
how will their birthday work out? |
 peaceBRU 2009-12-05 . chapter 43umm ok WOW. that was fucking long! lol. really awesomely written. i know thats not a word. lol. hope all is well! great job. cant wait to see what happens next! |
 XxBlissfulBlondeBrainxX 2009-12-04 . chapter 43aaw... well, i totalle get Gabriella's way of acting... i just hope they resolve their issues soon :) great chapter!! and seriously, dont worry about updating quickly, people must understand that you have other things to do :) |
 maya 2009-12-04 . chapter 43 A really great story! |
 Oliverwoodschic 2009-12-04 . chapter 43Hey, sorry you're super stressed and busy. I'm about to go through finals next week, so I get it.
Anyway, you're doing a really great job (like always). Everything seemed very real, realistic. All reactions from characters seemed in place... it was a very well written chaper.
Anyway, great job! (Usually this is where I tell people to update soon, but I'll forgo it this time. ;) Busy times suck but hopefully whatever's going on will be over with and we can all enjoy the holidays!) |
 em's-imagination 2009-12-04 . chapter 43Loved it.
I really quite like reading tensions between Troy and gabriella. Its just interesting. And especially something thats so important and such a big deal. I completely know how Gabriella feels in this situation. Some things are just non negotiable, and the fact that Troy tried to change that is inexcusable. This chapter was extremely interesting in seeing how they dealt with this fact. I can't wait to see how it all plays out over the next chapter and onwards.
Still loving your writing, as I always have. It makes me want to write. I wish I could find my motivation. I lost it over a year ago and haven't been able to get it back. Got any tips for me?? How do you find all these plot lines and manage to continue to make a story interesting after 42 chapters?
Em xx |
 Noelle82 2009-12-03 . chapter 43Brilliant chapter! Perfectly realistic and everything. Thanks for the update. The text at the end was sweet. |