|Reviews for The Someday Trilogy: This Moment|
| HERFACE 12/1/08 . chapter 1
Like the words of Sharpay; FABULOUS. Chad is freaking hilarious, and Troy and Gabriella are acting like rabbits. Your like the Dr. Seuss of fanfiction, A CLASSIC (but this story is way WAY more intended for OLDER audiences).
| nay88 12/1/08 . chapter 1
AH I'M SO EXCITED FOR THIS NEW STORY! I checked every single day to see if it was up. I'm not even kidding.
Don't kill me by making me wait for an update! Update soon!
| rachrep 12/1/08 . chapter 1
I got this update on my phone today and just had to read it then. Wow. I really really love the start of this.
Chad is hilarious. I was cracking up at him withe PA...those lines are classic...
“Would the couple humping in the white truck please stop, and get their asses inside.”
Troy’s hands froze in place on Gabriella’s breasts, as the two glanced around in bewilderment at what they had heard.
“That’s right. This is Chad. The Evans’ have a PA. And security cameras. With excellent zoom. So desist your grinding before we have not only a horror film being shot, but also a low budget porn…”
Seriously so funny.
I love how much Gabriella and Troy love, want, need are so horny for each other that their heads are about to explode. The feelings are so real and natural.
When Kelsi asked about her being serious with Troy and her watching Troy goof off and then she smiles and says "yeah...we are"...Gah...
Seriously, they better work it out with this whole college thing because their love and connection is so real, intense and meant to be that it just has to work out
Cant wait for the update! I loved it!
| Anne 12/1/08 . chapter 1
oh! I'm already loving this as much as PART I! :)
thank you so much! yours is one of the very few quality M rated stories out there!
| RissaIzDeBomb 12/1/08 . chapter 1
I'm back! This is a really good sign for you considering I'm not even much of a Troyella fan. But I really love this story for some reason! Can't wait for more though!
| Persephone Lemonade 12/1/08 . chapter 1
DAMN! I just got home from swimming practice and jumped with glee when I saw the email. Then I get here to review, as promised, only to find out that I am the 82nd reviewer. EIGHTY-SECOND!
DUDE! YOU'RE A FREAKING SUPERSTAR! BIGGER THAN ZAC! Lmao.
My commentary on this chapter:
It was AWESOME! I could not stop laughing with this chapter. Troy and Gabriella are so frisky and sexually frustrated. Love it.
Chad is... well, he's Chad. Still obnoxiously annoying yet totally loveable. Taylor is great. Lol.
Jason and Kelsi are also too cute! Love them.
YAY! I GOT A CHARACTER! A minor one that dies, thank you very much... *glares* BUT IT'S A CHARACTER! And like I said, I get a hot boyfriend, in a weird way. Lol. Thanks so much Dani, really. It means a lot. :)
It's so well written, but you already knew that. Can't wait for the next update.
- Nel xo.
| ziggy1401 12/1/08 . chapter 1
this is so good! you NEED to keep going!
| prettycharmedsista 12/1/08 . chapter 1
I saw the email and I was so excited! About to run around screaming! Thank you so much for starting the next part. I loved Once upon a time, and from the first chapter itself I can tell this story will be as awesome! I like how it had all the different elements from part 1 as a reminder, and I can't wait for the 'future talk'... Looking forward for the next chapter
| imonthebleachers 12/1/08 . chapter 1
AH! I love it! It's awesome! I've been looking for this alert to enter my email box since I read the last chapter of the first part! As always Dani, brilliant. I can't wait for the next chapter and the chapters after!
| psj 12/1/08 . chapter 1
I've been so looking forward to this story and you did NOT disappoint! There were so many hilarious lines and moments that had me laughing out loud (Chad on the PA, Chad's comments about T/G and digging for info on their sex life). Glad to see the T/G cutenessa and hotness is better than ever! I am so excited for you to be continuing this story...excellent start!
| Kaatiieex 12/1/08 . chapter 1
Excited for part two of the trilogy.
Update soon, so far so good!
| effortless 12/1/08 . chapter 1
Hee, your characterization of Chad cracked me up. This was so lovely, a nice mixture of humor and romance.
| marebear11 12/1/08 . chapter 1
I'm on board!
I can't wait to read more!
| Vfanforlife 12/1/08 . chapter 1
Amazing first chapter. You already get really hooked into the story.
So still on board for this story! lol.
| emmalouisexx 12/1/08 . chapter 1
Awh yay I'm so happy you updated. I don't even know where to start!
Love the Troy & Gabriella progression. I find it funny how horny Troy is. He is such a typical teenager once they get a taste of the apple they want the whole thing. I love how playful they are with eachother. It's great to see that you still put in the reality of their situation saying that they still need to talk about college & stuff. That will definitely be an interesting conversation. A lot of desicions will be made. So we already have something to look forward to.
I'm so happy Chad is back to his usual self. His jokes & pranks were hysterical. I'm also glad that him & Taylor are getting back to normal.
The whole concept of Jason's film was hysterical. The drama surrounding the scream had me in stitches.
As a side note when I saw this in my inbox I had to set aside a specific time so that I could thoroughly read it with no distractions. So I sit here now with my tea & must say you did an excellent job with this chapter. I am so excited for the rest of this fic.