You should show Haku and Rei confess to Naruto soon because you have the story labeled romance but have shown none.

if it's more than one girl its harmen

2 more of these whoud be the most epic amaunt of words and ya gotta be kidding me about the reduction of the curse mark.

Really good story hope you continue soon

Though there were quite a bit of spelling mistakes (they really frustrated me sorry) it was all around a very good beginning to the story, i approve.

nice i realy liked how naruto was reborn from the flames like a phionex.

does that mean naruto's kids will be immortal

i want pinata

You suck and I wish you would just jump off of a bridge and end all of our misery. Your plot line is pathetic, your grammar and spelling sucks and finally there are so many plot holes in the story it's like Swiss cheese. Just stop writing."

my response WHO THE HELL EVEN WRITES THAT! IT IS A LOAD OF BS NEVER LISTEN TO THIS UTTER STUPIDITY

you know I won't be surprised if Anko does drag Naruto back to her place when he removes the seal as "thanks" lol or at least be a extremely fierce and loyal friend to Naruto.

now your fanfiction version of Neji...I hate as much as that Snake-Teme he deserves much worse than he did to Sakura. Don't get me wrong I don't like Sakura in any fanfiction or even in the original manga she is a very shallow person from a young age sure she improved during Shippuden but for someone to relentlessly beat someone over and over for various things like asking to train with her, date her, or just a comment that was said incorrectly by a boy that has had no way of knowing the right way to say things to a girl is not someone I would ever consider a friend or even a teammate.

don't care what other girl you add but please consider Hinata as one of the girls.

really great story :)

Cool idea about the phoenix and dragons, I like it.

I really like this fic,i just hope you will update and you haven't abandoned it cuz i'm really getting anxious