hey :))


omg this iss so good! and it is also so true to Twilight with how Bella feels about Edward... especially in New Moon.

cant wait to hear more and see the movie with you this friday! (well hopefully anyways)

adios :D

-mab

I love it, so sad but so nice!

hey kate its jenny good job

once again, good job on this. It is so creative and even though I don't really like how you dissed Jacob, I like how you complimented Edward. God, I'm really conflicted with these books, aren't I? -sigh-

Hi,
I've never written a proper review b4 but I read ur Midnight Sun and thought it wss brilliant! Very moving, can't wait to see if you'll carry on writing like this as it gives a whole other side to Midnight Sun/Twilight. I love ur writng style too.
I have also just written a fanfic but mine is a lot fluffier than urs lol! If ur bored and get a chance to read my story 'What If...' I would be very grateful since I doubt any1 will read it but I enjoyed writing it anyway! Bye :-)

I like this.
It's superbly written and accurately, if metaphorically, describes the Bella/Edward relationship. I like how you incorporated Jacob as the sun, too.
Good job. :)