A great story. Very good.

Wow.
Uhh...I'm a little speechless.
Just...wow.
That was so good!
Uh, yeah, that's all I can say.
Wow!

Really, really sweet story! I love Edmund's gift - it's always seemed like he should have definitely gotten one as well, later, but I've never been able to think of a good one for him. Thing is, you're absolutely right - he doesn't need one! The snow globe representing the Cair was very sweet, though. Great work!

Aw, that was wonderful. I just love Edmund's gifts and the very end.

Aw, this is really nice! I like it a lot!

cute story!
^^

A lovely, well written and heartwarming story. Brilliant take on what Edmund's gift was and the best interpretation of the question I have read so far. I think you can tell I like it lol

That was really nice. Don't stop writing.

wow, you nearly made me cry. That was absolutely lovely. and i loved how you ended it, very nice job.

Holy cow.
This was the absolute best Father Christmas/Edmund fic I have read in a VERY, VERY long time.
I am going to read this over and over and OVER AGAIN.
And each time, I will enjoy it as much as the first.
Beautifully written. I was aching right along with him when it was appropriate, and smiling at the end.
Beautiful. That's all I have to say.
KEEP WRITING.

That was very interesting! Now we all know what Ed's gift was! Love to read more from you soon!

This was beautiful, and it does get one in the Christmas spirit, doesn't it? You pull off the present tense very well here and your descriptions are awe-inspiring. I love your presentation of the Great Hall. But Edmund's gift is especially wonderful. Bravo.

That was lovely. :)