|Reviews for Pick Up the Puzzler Pieces|
| JJ Rust 12/13/09 . chapter 15
Not a bad chapter. I think more could have been added to it.
| JJ Rust 12/12/09 . chapter 14
Some good thoughts from Crasher on her "kids."
| JJ Rust 12/9/09 . chapter 13
Entertaining exchange between Newcastle and Leader-One.
| JJ Rust 12/8/09 . chapter 12
Not a bad exchange between Matt and Leader-1, though I was a bit confused on what Leader-1's plan to get back at Cy-Kill is. I also had a hard time accepting the whole idea of a court summons on the Renegades.
| JJ Rust 12/7/09 . chapter 11
Pretty cool. Some of Hunter's thoughts were amusing.
| JJ Rust 12/6/09 . chapter 10
Pretty good rant by Braxis. It sounds like he's just a guy not satified with anything, and bitter toward all of creation.
| JJ Rust 12/4/09 . chapter 9
Not bad. Maybe you could have shown Braxis' reaction to Sunstreaker and Slingshot arguing.
| JJ Rust 12/3/09 . chapter 8
Good, funny exchanges between Turbo and Braxis. But again, way too short. And wouldn't the Decepticons have been watching Braxis during his little vacation in Paris?
| JJ Rust 12/2/09 . chapter 7
Rather short. Pretty good exchange between Braxis and Turbo. I would have liked to have seen this chapter be a little more in depth.
| JJ Rust 12/1/09 . chapter 6
Pretty good. You probably could have added some more to this chapter. Also the "I eye" bit read a bit awkward.
As always, I like the way you write for Dr. Braxis.
| JJ Rust 11/26/09 . chapter 5
Good one. I like the personalities you're showing for the Stunticons. The Megatron bit with pinning Motor Master to the wall and blasting Starscream was pretty funny.
| JJ Rust 11/25/09 . chapter 4
Not bad. Some interesting concepts here on Gobot and Transformer "phisiology." I still like Braxis' snarky thoughts.
| JJ Rust 11/24/09 . chapter 3
Who knew villains could be so cool? Good job with Braxis. This guy just has no fear when it comes to mouthing off to the Decepticons. Some great lines, and I liked his comment about Soundwave.
| JJ Rust 11/23/09 . chapter 2
Not bad. I like Braxis' cavalier attitude in being taken by the Decepticons. "A nice change of pace." Good one.
| JJ Rust 11/22/09 . chapter 1
Not bad. I did like the way you handled Braxis' attitude toward Cy-Kill. Good job mingling the Transformers in this as well.