 RedWaxie-Zero 10/18/04 . chapter 1Freakishly cool! love the twist in the end. |
 Bleh 3/30/04 . chapter 1 Hmm. It was...acceptable. The ending wasn't good at all, but the writing was quite decent. You didn't do a great job of conveying his emotions, though. Oh well. This fic just fades into the background with the others. Good try. |
 SugarIcing 1/27/04 . chapter 1I nearly cried. Poor Ron. I knew someone was going to do that someday. I feel really crappy here. I'm really hating myself now...
*sniffles* I have to write a fic. I wrote one Mary-Sue to get it out my system...I have a humor...I have a...a...humor/action fic...
and I have a serious fic.
I'm really boring. Must...write...more...
Icing :P |
 Jennifer R 11/12/03 . chapter 1sad... very sad... but why? Why do you have to do this to Ron? He was like... the first person who Harry met! Nice! |
 chrissy 8/3/03 . chapter 1 i loved "shredded resemblances"! i just thought i'd led you know that you are an excellent writer and i really liked the ending (Hermione being the psychiatrist)- that was very origional! i love reading HP fanfics, and yours are some of the best! keep up your awesome witing!
-chrissy
massachusetts |
 Goosie Gal 6/5/02 . chapter 1damn...that was good... i like the stories where ron turns evil..this was beautifully written. i almost wish that you would've made some sort of conclusion on this...i wanna know hermione's reaction..grr...but you have to take what you get...good story |
 Flightless Angel1 3/17/02 . chapter 1YES! Everything revolves around the Malfoys...they're the center of the universe! AngstMalfoyGOOD STORY! Great story, by the way! |
 LilyAyl 2/28/02 . chapter 1I liked this, though Ron did not sound very crazy. However, he did sound chaotically rational, if that can even make sense. Anyways, Ron would be a good canidate to turn evil. Hey, do me a favor and read 'Cruciatus', it's a monologue from the POV of someone who's parents died, not who would first think. (aka NOT Potter). Please? Danke. And Continue Writing, if you ever publish, email me! |
 Tigre 12/29/01 . chapter 1That was really creepy. I've always thought that Ron seemed to be on the brink of insanity...good work. |
 Theresa 12/12/01 . chapter 1 I love this story. It made me cry (literally)! Only some stories can do that to me you know. |
 mlm 11/26/01 . chapter 1 Wow, you're still here. I've pretty much given up on this place. And then I just kind of...stopped coming. Ginny's not *allowed* to marry Neville. She has to marry Tom Riddle. Heh..sorry. I've recently fallen in love with Tom. Thanks to certain people. I knew the shrink was going to be Hermione! Well, either her or Harry or Draco, but still... I love bitter Ron. He's so much fun to mess around with. Love your writing still. And your endings. - |
 Hecate not signed in 11/25/01 . chapter 1 Wow...that was brilliant. |
 tippy 11/25/01 . chapter 1 Hey! Wow that was great! It almost made me cry weirdly enough. It was completely obvious she was Hermione but that's alright. She married Malfoy! Yay for her! Hehehe. I don't think Ron's gonna crazy. Well, maybe a little bit. I hope not. That was wonderful though! |
 Ruby 11/25/01 . chapter 1 Ah..finally got my Author Alert list back to normal...though I think I'm missing a name or two. Quite nice, I can see how Ron might turn, but I can't see Hermione changing her last name to Malfoy, or anything else for that matter. She's too independent to take on her husband's name. |
 alphabet 11/24/01 . chapter 1 Whoa. That was intense. Very nicely written, but very intense. You argued your point well, but I just don't think that character would turn like that. Still, very well-written, very very...good. (See, this is why you shouldn't review right after you read, but I forget to review if I don't.) |