Aww that was sad! but, I loved the story poor Demyx

I enjoyed the read, a little difficult with the constant change in perspective and the no spaces when the scene changed. But I did enjoy it

There better be more! I hate romance stories that end like that! HURRY UP AND UPDATE! the story is awesome!

Wow, that's was so screwed up it was almost funny. Almost. Good job.

awesome story hope you continue it

This is a really good story. You have a unique writing style and the paoring is rarely seen so...yeah...

The beginning is quite great, please update soon!

Honestly, I've never read a DemyxSaix before and on top of that it's not rushed love either, and written/roleplayed very well. I'm interested now I'll be on the look out for the next chapter.