fair decent ending, merci bien

Loved it! Maybe if you were to complete a sequel, you could do one about Kayla's life in Washington, and for the traditional X-Files feel to the story ... have her involved in one of Mulder/Scully's cases some way?

This is an excellent story. Can't wait for the next chapter,hope Kayla's ok!

yay u updated!

glad scully's not swimming in a river in egypt no mo

Good story. Want to wrng Dana's neck for not telling the kid she's related though

oh my gods, on the edge of my seat! please keep up the good work!

Hey!

This is awesome mate! I read this in my spare today at school so I couldnt reply earlier, lol! Please keep it up, I just love this story and where you are taking it!


Cheers,
Charlie!

This is a good story. Yeah, kinda a blunt statement, but it's true. This is a good case file, which is refreshing, with all of the PWPs and such. Anyway, i can't wait for an update. However, the last couple of chapters were sort of bland and the story is starting to become stale. Make sure that you don't fixate on one idea or senerio too long. Also, you don't have to write what happens every minute in the story line. You can skip a couple hours (or even days) and try not to explain what happened during the "missing time" in a paragraph. Put it in the dialoge. It's always more interesting. Furthermore, you've had two "mini stories" going on until just recently, meaning that some chapters took place at Kayla's Home and the others in Washington D.C. Now that those two stories have merged, the story line is going to tend to stagnate. Make sure that you create new (or could be old) separate situations and settings to make your story more colorful and suspenseful. You don't have to take any of my advise into consideration, after all it's your story and you probably have some idea of where it's headed, but these tips are just to help carry your drama more smoothly as to not be confusing or have any rough or boring spots. Anyway, i love the story and am curious to find out what's gonna happen next. :)

-Ilovenumber77

Hey,
Im still loving this story and the way you are writting it!

Just a question are you american? because isnt Kayla Reyonlds the name of the litle girl killed in the small american town a few years ago?

Sorry Im just curious person lol. keep writting, I cant wait for more :D

:( oh, so sad... but i still love it! :D

A great story. Very good.

omg can't wait for more!