hey it didn't suck! i thought it was a cute one shot, n very well written. good job

Hey your story did not suck at all! In fact did you write a part 2? It was amazing. ]

This is fanastic.

I can't wait for you to update!

If you want I could possibly become your beta...

I have written some fanfics so I am no stranger to editing and what not :D

R U KIDDIN ME? This is a great begining to a great story.

I say go ahead and continue it and Ill take you up on your offer. Maybe alittle visit from Mr. T can help me with my story. Bibi!

Autumn Eve3

I liked this story I think you should contiune. Oh, and I don't want a meat pie but I would sure like a visit from Sweeney espeacilly if he behaves like he does in this .

How about both of them? LOL! Anyway, I really love this so far, dear! Update soon!

Very nice story!Very cute!It would be great if you continued this!:)

Very good story! I'd be willing to be a beta for you, please check out my beta profile.

Much yours,

Jessica

It's good! Sweet!

its good!