Wow.

This is lovely.

Wow! These few words pack an intense punch. It takes skill to write like this. I like the mention of Rosalie striking the match on her wrist.

Perfect snapshot of 2 of Twilight's most prickly characters.

Clever, quirky and superbly written - I think there is more in this story than I haves picked up on my first reading, so I will be coming back to it again & again

Ness

i'm just loving your writing style.

They are magnificent and I love your red pen shaped like a scalpel.

This is perfection. A short, drabble of words that say so much. I loved it.

There's something about the two of them I've always liked. Loved. This was great.

Love it! I was always irritated about Bella making that dumb decision on wanting to be a dead,sparkly brat -.-

I love both Leah and Rosalie,so that had a bit influence on my thought on this story,but I'd love it anyway(sorry if there are any grammar mistakes in this,but other than the fact that I'm not from America,nor England,I'm incredibly tired) )

i liked the whole thing short but good

yeah, now that's good.

you know what? this is fantastic.

This is literally the best thing I've ever read in the Twilight fandom. So mush powerful emotion packed into so few words.

wow. amazing.