LMAO, even if your work don't get much reviews, but it's still really nice ^_^
Marksman 2008-12-15 . chapter 5
Nicely done. It's quite interesting in the form of plot and also in the presentation of it. Its simple but detailed enough in the balance of complexity. It's also got a good balance of speech and detail so it works nicely. Keep up the good work and do give your opinion on my own work (Latest chapters, earlier ones are not my best =( )