I found this story great and any other who thinks other way then just ignore them...

Ooh, that's creepy! I like it a lot. Very good writing and plot. I'm surprised that I haven't seen anything else about this mage.

ABOUT TIME! There are so many people here who use humor in order to hide the fact that they suck at writing. You were not to serious or overdamatic. YOU WERE GOOD! Amazing job and I would LOVE to read more of your work.

SKRE! THIS IS COOL! Awesome! A little short, but who am I to complain?

Oh wow! I love DL fics, and this is a good one. Short, dramatic, I like it! Keep writing! :)

I didn't like it. Wanna know why? That's cuz I LOVED it!!!! Very beautiful piece of work! Keep writing, you've got a talent!

OOOOOOh. I like it.it's all cool and....freaky neat.

It's good stuff, sounds like something to be told around a campfire, I can see this being one of the stories told to kids from Palanthas late at night to scare em, but u made Darius seem like he was more of a puppet than sum1 who had decided he didn't like how things were going and wasn't going to let them get any worse ya know? Oh and wasn't Nuitari one of the moons and not a God? Good work anyway :)

that was wicked!!!!!! i am a great fan of dragon lance and you did the books proud (not trying to sound pompous) i feel inspired keep it up!

I like it! It was well written (even with the lack of some minor details... Yes, the mage's name is a MINOR detail ;)
This fic was a little bit too short... but it's quality not quantity, right? anyway, what it lacks in length it makes up for in the
style in which it was written. Now, I'm going to stop writing the review, and go read all of your other fics right now! And I suggest that evryone else does
the same thing ASAP!

Good stuff, would write more but g2g..

Okay, so this was a little 'dire and dramatic' but that's what make's it so good. I love your use of language too. Be very proud of this, it's great. ;)

Cool vignette. Poor Darius.

*PHEEEEEEW*!! ::waves hand as if burned;; hot stuff!!

Okay,you guys, I didn't read the Defence of Magic trilogy, so I don't know the real name of the mage. I just substituted it with Darius. Also, can you people tell as many people as possible about this fic. Unless you're flaming, of course. Thanx.