 UchihaLover 2009-08-19 . chapter 1 Love it!! Please tell me you're continuing this? |
 EtrangeChatNoir 2009-08-04 . chapter 1Such a great beginning, I want to know how this will turn out ! Please update soon, you've vritten a very promising story^^! |
 Whats Mine Is Yours 2009-07-25 . chapter 1hahah ironic how they did lose him. :(
is this a chapter fic or oneshot? at first i thought it was a sasusaku. oh well, ill read it anyways |
 Koko7180 2009-07-04 . chapter 1this is an amazing starting, i´m really curious now hehe
i hope you´ll update soon
hugs |
 moi 2009-04-26 . chapter 1 This story seems interesting and please update soon cuz I can't wait to see how it develops :) |
 QueenThayet12990 2009-04-15 . chapter 1Hm...I'm curious to see how Itachi is only partly responsible for their deaths. This should prove interesting! I really like the title, by the way! Keep writing! |
 Mika Huntress 2009-03-16 . chapter 1This is a really great story so far! I wish that you would update though. x_x It's been months.
Please update with the next chapter soon. Pretty please? 0:-)
Or at least let us know if you're done with the story so I won't have to wait in agony ;-)
Haha. Great story! ^^
-Mika |
 michi 2009-03-03 . chapter 1 Why. Aren't. You. UPDATING! |
 Mokulule 2009-02-18 . chapter 1Wow, this is definitely interesting, I'd love to read more :D |
 Fish Queen Fei 2009-02-03 . chapter 1Interesting chapter.
It's well written and a "quality fic" (finally!).
Hope to read more, so update!
The suspense is killing us.=D |
 Confuzzled Clairvoyant 2009-01-27 . chapter 1who~~i am so glad and excited that you've decided to work on a itasaku fic, i am an immense fan of this couple. and i really liked how u switched formats between a letter and an email etc. it was a really interesting read.
plz update soon and good luck with writing =] night!! |
 Sakuraangel1327 2009-01-26 . chapter 1aw, u must update, otherwise i may just lose my mind. lol.
I am guessing she hasnt pieced together the fact that he looks like Sasuke right? what an idiot. she even said he looks like Sasuke, tsk tsk tsk. |
 Triste1 2008-12-23 . chapter 1Interesting. I foresee some interesting drama on the horizon. Uchiha Itachi still responsible, if partially, for his parents' deaths. Sasuke out for revenge. Sakura stuck in the middle with the addition of coffee in the picture. Fascinating.
The change from one scene medium--letter, email, story-telling, excerpt from journal--isn't quite as smooth as I would like. It's done in a choppy manner, where one reads of something and then suddenly it jumps to something else that seems somewhat unrelated. I would have preferred a little more depth. If you don't mind stories above the R rating, I would recommend 'The Spy and The Hitokiri' by anna-neko at /spy_prologue.asp . It isn't quite the jump of story-telling medium you use, but the jump from one POV to another is somewhat similar.
Keep writing and good luck with future chapters. |
 satoshii 2008-12-22 . chapter 1An excellent start to an excellent story. I have high expectations, but I'm not sure if that's exactly healthy for you. I don't really have any advice for you other than to check easily looked over misspellings.
Update as soon as you can. Thanks for writing!! |
 MizzHaruhi00 2008-12-17 . chapter 1Oh, I love it already! It's a great start! |