I really like this story, you protraded the ministy really well, but you should have made Ginny go back to Tom, but it was still a nice story. Good work!:D

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I cannot believe I read this. But I'm more afraid that I actually enjoyed it. It was so dark and twisted, and FUBAR for sure, but it had a charm to it. The emotions that were raw and destroyed and still there. . . .

Well done.

-Kora

i really love this story line. what if you continued and had tom find then and take them away to a mysterous place somewere or another and have them grow up happy. if you kept doing that you could have harrys kid fall in love with molly and the havoc that would cause.

you could have him slightly change the spell that creates the dark mark and have it, when it calls her, sexually tease her and create sexual frustration. if you did that you could have the spell render her unable to feel pleasure at anothers touch other than that of the dark lord.

Beautifully written. Sad, but lovely all the same.

Utterly dark yet captivating story!

hey are you writing a sequel and i like the name Annwyn but you could change it to Arwen it sounds nicer

Eerily perfect; so dark, so tainted, but brilliantly so. I loved every single detailing of it. It ended the way it should; but only problem I see... and it doesn't really matter as I actually liked the problem and prefer it over the alternative... is the appearance of the chid. Technically, the child has inherits the physical traits of Voldemort, am I right? So in other words, the physical traits are tied into his DNA? I don't think that actually makes much sense. He was turned into what he was through magic alone, though losing pieces of soul made his physical appearance into what no longer resembles that of a human. But within, he is still... however... as human as anyone else; according to what is given within the series. So although the splitting of his soul and the dark magic has changed him, it didn't change his DNA. He still has human DNA strand, so he is still human, although he does not look that way. So the child shouldn't be able to look like him, unless the child has did what he has done to look that way. But anyways, I actually prefer how you did make Molly like that.

loved the story!

AH! Its done? Dammit! I was really liking it. Ginny went of of her self for a while didn't she? Lost a few screws... Well I supposed He really did love her though. You did a very good job on portraying the other side of Tom ,it was well done I really liked this fic.

*screams*

oh noes! Poor Ginny! Hell I wouldn't want her to be preggers either with Voldies kid, but omg... poor gin!

Ok, not so believable that it would be possible for her to sit at the slytherin table, but other than that good chapter.

o.O


Oh noes! Ginny is preggers with evil's incarnate! lol


Nice ending doll. Nice. Wow.

Jezz.. I'm getting all flustered over here! lol You are very talented, and have quite the forte for making the reader connect with the story and the events.

Brave Ginny. Brave girl ...


Wow.

That's some heart palpitating goodies right there darling. I have always been an in the closet Ginny/Voldemort shipper. This is SO good! I'm over thrilled that you haven't made Ginny off on the start to "need" him. Its so annoying when that happens right off the bat. I'm off to read the next chapter!